An entry for my Fanfiction.net based CPS chronicles...enjoy. This is my first foray into MLP fanfic territory so please leave a review if you rate it.
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Man this is good! When's the next chapter coming? =3 eagerly waiting.
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thanks for the kind comment...atm...only three chapters are ready to go...and me and my co author have other story obligations...but we will do our best.
ohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh long and epic chapters are so awesome!
Do keep this coming please =3
Well you asked for a coment here one Please for the love of Blind Io start a new line when you change speaker
otherwise good story
New speeker = new line
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I keep meaning to do that but the same thing that stopped me updating for so long keeps me from editing...stupid real life
Can this story actually have a description? I have no clue what it is, but I am curious.
4483477 I wil admit...I;m not very good at descriptions...its a blind spot for me...I will update the description when I come up with one that does my story justice
4484949 thank you
To be perfectly honest, I was sincerely hoping that Jump Star and his family could head home, its not every-day that you finally get the chance to return from whence you came after-all.
At this point I have to say, i think this is
A. Cut from Whole Cloth
B. Some sort of internal snapshot into Pinkie's Brain
C. A long tale where Murphey's Law finds ONE guy and keeps punching him in the balls...repeatedly
D. All of the above.
Nice running gag this chapter, very nice.
4510746 I tend to have murphys law chase poor Matt more or less as a petty revenge cause his life is far more interesting then mine.
4510168 I chose to keep them there cause by that point, Jump star and his amily had been there several generations. The Paradiso colony and Nullspace WAS their home by this point.
Despite having introduced amnesia to himself, he still manages to curse like the rest of the outlanders
Aram would be unhappy, he did a MUCH more thorough job with the Mayor when he used that brick.
Well, he finally managed to actually LEAVE and accomplish his mission. Aria is probably most pleased now.
This story has definitely had its moments, and while there was one thing I thought could've worked differently (And given Matt some much needed public boosting form the locals) it still managed to keep my attention firmly....like a trainwreck.
In closing, I have this one thing to say:
'What A Long Strange Trip It's Been'