At approximately seven p.m. a young boy went missing from the local Conversion Bureau. The entire population of the Bureau moved to help find him. Including a particular pink earth pony.
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Cloudhammer
I never make mistakes. I thought I'd made one once, but I was wrong.
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As always, a impressive piece of writing. Keep up the good work!
Shall I say it? I'm...
Nah, that's so 2012.
>pink earth pony
>detective
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>Conversion Bureau
>No sad or dark tag
So yeah, I would have liked this story, if I hadn't come to expect things liked armed conflict and such from CB fics.
I actually rather enjoyed CB: Not Alone, and so this fic just felt really... weird, since I see the ponies in a bad light.
Anyways, I think this is a good fic, but I just found it as somewhat of a shock, if you will.
1996190
Well, that's the whole point. There's a much broader world than just the struggle of humanity or any of the war stuff that some people tend to focus on. That's what I want to start writing once I conclude the overall Cloudyverse story, is to dig into the individuals that fill my worlds and reveal their lives both before and after Rejection. Granted, I'm doing that anyway with the main story, but there's so much more beyond that it's more than a little daunting
Nice job with Pinkie in this, Cloudhammer, I thought she came across fairly well.
1996190 If you don't mind me making a suggestion, I would recommend giving a few other Cloudyverse stories a try, they are likely to be a bit different from what you've read before.
I for one approve of Thinkie-pie!
A nice little story
Itchy teeth? Now, that's a new one indeed. I like your Pinkie Pie, but this being a problem of loyalty Rainbow Dash might have been a better choice from the mane6.
Less fun though.
1998820
Maybe, but I can see Pinkie as being the most likely of the Mane Six to bend over backward to help cheer up her friends. She's also my vote for the most stubborn of them in finding out what's making someone upset.
1998360 Alright, I'll give it a go.
1999145 In that case, The Conversion Bureau: The First Year is the first Cloudyverse TCB story, though it is technically a sequel to the non-TCB In Duty's Name which is the story that sets up why the conversions are happening and also introduces some of the OCs in the rest of the 'verse.
That was an awesome story.
I wish I could still write like this.
*throws Lab Rat rewrite attempt #357 in the electronic garbage can*
Thank you for a slice-of-life story, Cloudhammer. It's refreshing to read a TCB story now and then where millions of lives aren't hanging in the balance. I guess I can't say too much, since I haven't written one myself, but I like reading them.
2001264
Well, in all honesty, you made me choose to finally kick this story off the back burner. You do have a point on there being too many "fate of the world in our hands" TCB stories, and not enough that just look at the simple things and the extroardinary, ordinary people who are just trying to get by.
This is a very enjoyable fic. I never understand the role of Pinkie Pie in some TBC. They make her seem insane.
You did a good job of maker her the same character we know and love, it was short and sweet so props on the good writing.
Alex is a good kid too bad he became a pony