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It has been a few months since Luna has returned, and Celestia makes her get out to the School for Gifted Unicorns. A talented little filly by the name of Starshine captures her eye. Luna offers the talented filly the chance of a lifetime.

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Comments ( 13 )

I like it so far. I'd give it a solid 8/10:twilightsmile:

Thank you guys, this is my very first fic, so thank you so much! I'll work on trying to loosen it up a little, but this idea actually came to me one night and I stayed up all night writing, so that's probably the tenseness. Still, thank you so much for your feedback! It is much appreciated, and always welcome!!

So, when's the next update for it, you think?:rainbowhuh:

2033164 I'm not sure, but pretty soon I think. I'm starting to write the second chapter, but I don't really have a lot of free time on my hands. But the time I do have, is when I don't have my laptop with me. But I'm trying! It'll be up soon!! :twilightsmile:

2034181 Awesome! If the next chapter is as good as this one, it'll be off to a great start for a first story, I think. :pinkiesmile:

I like this chapter, it seems a bit less clunky than the first, and overall I like Star's character :D

Hi, I'm so sorry I haven't been able to write any of A Young Mind lately. I've been really busy with life and so I haven't been able to write due to lack of time. Hopefully I'll have more time soon, but in the meantime, if anyone's still watching this fic, I'd like to see something showing you're here. A comment would be absolutely great!! Thanks to anyone still checking up on old Starshine and Luna!!
~Twimusic :twilightsmile:

I'd say to try to continue the story, but if you feel like not writing then just don't lol. Just do whatever makes you happy and pony on man.

Alright, I'll try to continue it, but it wont be as long as originally planned.

Comment posted by RedKing deleted May 1st, 2013
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