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MaxKodan


Just a pony lovin' guy

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1000 years before FiM began, Princess Luna grew jealous of Princess Celestia, and so she refused to let the sun shine. She was stopped by Princess Celestia and imprisoned in the moon, but is that the whole story? Isn't it likely that the Elements of Harmony imprisoned Nightmare Moon in stone, like what happened to Discord?

I've heard many people joke about Celestia's overkill in sending her sister to the moon for 1000 years, but given the possible circumstances, I think there might be another reason she did what she did. After all, what sort of punishment do you think the other pony tribes called for for Nightmare Moon's crimes?

(Note: If anyone can suggest a good picture for this, I'd love to look through them.)

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#1 · Jan 22nd, 2012 · · ·

Not bad man, keep up the good work.

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Thanks! I think I will. Once I route out my next plot point to expand upon, I'll do just that.

I like it very much! :D

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Thank you! I really wanted to write a short story that seems like it actually could have happened amidst all these fantasy fics and ships and gory craziness and depressing deaths.

You used "sheilded" in the second sentence. The correct spelling is "shielded". Other than that, I :heart: it :pinkiehappy:

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There's always one. One typo in every chapter / story I write, I swear <<; Thanks

meh you'd think a mare facing execution would gladly take what to her is probably just one extended cat-nap then have her head cut off...
Well whatever no vllian is ever truly in their right mind and Luna was "mad with lonelyness and gref" if canon is anyting to go by.

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She also didn't know that Celestia knew she'd get out. She thought it was a permanent banishment. Plus the whole Nightmare Moon being Luna's dark side thing: Evil sees things differently than Good.

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