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A short story meant to give some 'background' to some art I had commissioned. This idea came to me over the Christmas holidays and I just had to write it. It stars a certain older, more adult Spike in a future without Twilight Sparkle and her friends.

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This story is beautiful... and I cried. I did.
I wish I may someday become as talented at tugging at peoples heartstrings as you have, for it is awe-inspiring really.


I love this. I love this a lot. Following, favoriting, and loving it! :heart:

The story... Very emotional. To have the darkest of hearts. This story deserves more attention!

This was absolutely wonderful. Thank you so much for the great read... :heart:

303 views are you kidding?! Few times, in my eyes, has underrated held more meaning than with this story. Brilliant story all around! :applecry::unsuresweetie::scootangel:

Though, in my eyes, there are a few inconsistencies regarding sending Spike back and potentially altering the timeline and whether his return to the past could be considered a 'reward' but I won't go into that. :ajsmug:

Hum...that was beautiful., I will be looking forward to read more of your stuff :pinkiehappy:

I did NOT saw that coming. Roo being Scoots and Bad Apple being Applebloom, I mean. Obviously, that was Sweetie Belle. :unsuresweetie:

An... unusual story, but an emotional one.

Pretty decent high fantasy tale...to me, it had a somewhat Arthurian flavor to it.

I gotta agree with Sweetie Belle's reasoning when Solace was fading away: she just tried to murder one of her partners right in front of her king! In the same scene, her romantic feelings for Solace were very out of place and contributed nothing to the story. There were also a couple of times where you started a new paragraph while a character was speaking, but failed to place quotation marks at the start of those paragraphs.

There were a few more minor hiccups, but nothing so bad that they distracted from a good fantasy tale. :scootangel:

“The line of the alicorns has come to an end. It is now the time for unicorn magic and friendship.

So much for racial equality...

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