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After the events at the end of War Never Changes Cane and the rest of the team find themselves with a serious problem, and no clear idea of what to do with it. It's going to take all their effort to put together a plan and right the wrongs that were done by Cane's brother, hopefully restoring balance to two worlds at the same time.

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Wonderful, I see wut you did there and I'm not only talking about the HUB :pinkiecrazy:

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I sent you this chapter like a week ago, how are you only just now seeing wut I did thar? :derpytongue2:

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Oh please I thought it was supposed to be a secret :rainbowlaugh:

Damn alot of words 4 the 1st chapter :pinkiegasp:

Happy :heart:s and whooves day btw :ajsmug:

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DUDE! The haters arrived and I didn't even notice!

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Yeah I was originally gonna do just three chapters, but it turned into something much larger, so chapter 1 was very big and covers part 1 of the story, but the next parts will be shorter by half or more. :twilightsheepish:

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Already 2? :rainbowhuh: Sweet Celestia's flaming ovaries... That was quick:twilightoops:

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Haha, I...flaming ovaries...how is that even...I laughed way too hard at that, and I'm at work.

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You can't comprehend the nature of a goddess :pinkiehappy:

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Obviously...I still laughed way too hard at it, and only my sister was around to comprehend the statement and why I laughed.

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I know that feeling... :pinkiehappy:

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I second that. I would even go further - that's the first pony fanfiction with humans in it that I want to read :rainbowlaugh:

But you know... Now that I think about it, pretty late I guess, weren't horses supposed to be extinct in the Fallout Universe? :rainbowderp: I only mean that the way, that it could, maybe, throw the people a little bit off to see a living horse :pinkiehappy:

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I'm glad to know you two enjoy it, I know it's a hard subject for people to embrace so I'm happy you guys have taken to it :yay:

and yes, horses are extinct, Paul probably did a lot of explaining to various people and I Just omitted it. also, I should point out that Cane is BRIGHT BLUE! I'm pretty sure that would throw people off too given the usual colour palette of the creatures of the wasteland. :derpytongue2:

The people of the wasteland in my story are very much like the people in the games, if they have nothing to contribute to you they will basically leave you alone, and if you try to talk to them they say very little :pinkiehappy:

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A blue unicorn with a blond mane? What's wrong with that? That's quite an ok colour mixup for equestrian terms :trollestia:

Yeah I've always loved that aspect of the inhabitants of the Wasteland :rainbowlaugh: Talkative when they needed something and boring when not :derpytongue2:

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yeah fine for equestrian terms, I'm talking about the human wasteland though :derpytongue2:

but yeah, people mostly give the odd creature a wide berth, but give him time, when they get to the collective more than a few people are going to be asking about him. :raritywink:

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Ah yeah the medical examination with THAT rubber thing :pinkiehappy:

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:twilightblush: You always seem to know where I'm heading before I head there, it freaks me right the buck out sometimes :pinkiegasp:

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Enough read books, articles on TVTropes, series and movies watched and games played gives you Omniscience :pinkiecrazy:

Ah Ha. you may think i was late to comment. but.... i was here he whole time.
i havent read anything. YET! because ive been reading New Roam.
I have downloaded the two chapter's here and im gonna read them atfer i finish reading New Roam.
Good Luck with the writing :)

!!SPOILER WARNING!!
ok... i read it... and... BWAHAHAHAHAHAhahaha. omg that was the best intro to human cane that could ever of happened. it had me in tears it was that funny.

okay seriously I can't wait to read more of this, I am assuming that sugar is going to try to prevent some of the things that happened to him in his would so hat it doesnt happen to paul.

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Wow you just favorited the stories today and you're already all the way through them? Nice :pinkiehappy:

Cane is intent on making sure circumstances go better for the humans, but you'll just have to wait and see what happens :raritywink:

2179704 yea I read the first one last night and didnt stop until I was at chapter 20 at which point the sun was just coming up so I got a couple hours of sleep where I dreamt about the equestrian wasteland, woke up around noon 30 got chores done finished the rest took about an hour break and then started reading the sequal

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I'm touched. I'm not gonna say WHERE I'm touched, but it's somewhere I find uncomfortable and weird. :pinkiesick::rainbowlaugh:

Welcome to the party. I should have a new chapter up by the end of the week...barring any problems of course. I run into problems where I get side tracked writing other parts of the story, so I actually just finished the finale chapter of this story, and I have another chapter half written that is two or three chapters ahead of where we are now. So some delays now equals some faster updates later :derpytongue2:

2181039no problem that just means once you do get to those parts they will already be written and the the next update is quicker

so are you going to mention the robotic horse giddyup buttercup at anypoint in the story, because out of all the fallout crossovers where somepony is tranfered to the wasteland USA I surprisingly have yet to see anyone mention it; since on its poster it says the ultimate in "equestrian" robotics

aww but i wanted to hear the story too :( great chapter btw

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Lol, I obviously wasn't as clever as I thought. See the dialogue Cane launches into at the end of the chapter is the opening of the first episode of FiM, so my train of thought was that he was going to launch into the TV show. So if you want to know the story he told just watch the cartoon! :pinkiehappy:

2226311 yea i know i just wanted to be childish XD

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lol okay, so long as I'm not misunderstanding and making my story too detatched

Hey I also waaaaaaaanted to heaaar the storyyy! :raritydespair:

Another very nice chapter. I'm curious to meet Crackshots husband :pinkiecrazy:

Jack MacManus... I'm a step away from telling you to scrap the future pony story and write Fallout fanfics about him :rainbowlaugh: The whole missile stunt is SO much like the game :raritywink:

Been waiting a while for this episode, nice work Jarmari. I will continue reading text(s) you based your story arc so far off (Half-way through it).

@Alamut: Might I recommend the film he's based off, *SPOILERS* Boondock Saints :) (also has a sequel). Enjoy

*see's new chapter*: DOWNLOADED!!!

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Thank you! I'm always so glad when people pick up on the pop culture references I hide in the story. The whole thing is riddled with them, some more blunt (talking about pony versions of movies) others are more subtle (the red gate and Cane's comment are a TRON reference) so it's nice to see a subtle one noticed :yay:

Apologies, have not seen Tron in many years, I was young the last time. May re-watch.
Have noticed lots of references, which I sorta live off :3. (I got the Boondock one the moment you described the jacket)
Keep up good work :)

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Oh yeah, it's no big deal no need to apologize certainly :P I was just using it as an example. :derpytongue2: The conversation about the scotch is actually lifted right from an episode of Supernatural :pinkiecrazy: It just makes me happy to know that people catch on to those references. :rainbowkiss: Also I'm glad you got it BEFORE his name was said, that means I did an even better job.

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What's Craig?” Ruby asked.
“Scotch.” Paul answered without looking up from his data pad. “It's only made and sold in a tiny area on the north tip of Caithness county. It's peaty and sharp, with a long finish of citrus and tobacco notes.”

***WARNING: SUPERNATURAL SEASON 6 SPOILERS!!!***
i know that reference. i have the dvd and i remember thats how they figure out where crowely's bones are cause he said that the only stuff he drinks. :P and its the episode where bobby gets his soul back. i loved that one. and they also get his signet ring and bring back crowelys son Gavin? i think its Gavin, and he rats out where the bones are. and they even bring up the fact that Crowely wore a kilt.

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Whoa! Spoilers for anyone who hasn't reached Season 6 yet! :derpytongue2:

2296351 OH CRAP MY BAD. i shall put up a sign.

Heh I love Jack McManus!Even his name his 'manly'(pun unintended) This story is definitely an insta-fav like the 1st one,read through both in just a day. Quick question though,will there be future 'dlcs' ? cause 15 years is a long time in between now and then. Either way,your story is lighthearted in comparison to the other Foe fics I've read..especially Project Horizons but it's definitely very enjoyable,especially the little comments at the footnotes:pinkiehappy:

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:pinkiehappy: Thanks so much, glad you like it. I found so many of the FoE stories are SO DARK and it bummed me out a little, so my story is more normal life kind of style. Playing the Fallout games I never really got the impression of the dark misery that was supposed to permeate the universe so I wrote my story more in the way I always felt playing the games. :derpytongue2:

Also, yes, I have plans for more stories. Currently I have this one, the one after this one, and some vague notions for one after that. There is also Alamut's story Fallen Star which is about Ruby's time in the Enclave, but be warned, it IS much more in line with the regular FoE style, so it's dark and sad.

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Yeah I know. Humans are strange disgusting creatures, but there's just this morbid fascination with them so I keep a few around for experimentation and to make up stories like these :derpytongue2:

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Their brains can be put in jars and they can run-off radio transmissions from it. Astounding!
FIRST WAS THE BRAIN... no wait...
They even have things called toes, disgusting.
Cuddly like teddy bears though.
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Nothing compared to my ATOMIC robo scorpions...

It's either that or testing on animals :)

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I don't even know how to reply to that...haha :rainbowlaugh:

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All but the static noise one are from my head...
I need to memorize useful things.:raritycry:

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LOL I thought you were quoting the doctors from Old World Blues.

2297305 I can see where you're coming from but other writers then to include the psychological trauma and internal turmoil that the characters go through since they're born and raised in the stressful environment or a relatively sterile stable/vault and then thrusted into combat. Whereas Cane was living in a time where war was underway then frozen and thawed out into the wasteland and got lucky with the 1st encounter though it makes me curious...What about Paul ? He seems to have a rather good knowledge of the wasteland despite being alone...and also are the events in the story before or after the Battle of Hoover Dam ?:twilightsmile:

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I was, I memorised em... to my memory :).

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