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Garbo


A Pasty Plebeian Pencil Pusher

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Well, it turns out they play Football in Equestria too - well, hoofball - and just like here, there's a Superbowl. And of course, with the Superbowl comes the Superbowl Party. Now when it comes to Superbowl parties, the Earth Ponies who invented the sport tend to have the best ones, although they sometimes get just a little carried away. Ponyville, being an Earth Pony dominated town, is no exception, and every year, most of the town gathers to watch the EHL champion crowned. Follow this tale of laughs, food, grudges, drinks, and ... romance? ... at Ponyville's Annual Superbowl Party.
This story is a collab between members of The Sports Bar
group here on FIMFiction. Each chapter is written by a different author and their name is listed with their chapter.
Cover Art by unoservix, used with permission. This story is based on Superbowl XLVII.

Chapters (4)
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Comments ( 50 )
Comment posted by Pick-Six deleted Feb 8th, 2013

Bah, damn website being retarded. I like the Intro, man! Think the formatting took a dump in the transfer though.

Dude, It's not hoofball.
It's longball!
(Association) football is hoofball.

2093708
Fixed the formatting. I forgot to do it.

Pardon me, but wouldn't it be the EHL? The Equestrian Hoofball League? Unless I'm missing what the F stands for in which case I apologize.

2093864
Wow, I can't believe I messed that up. Thanks.

2093909
Just wait until my chapter ...

I will definitely be reading this tonight. Perfect Cover pic too. Why does it not surprise me the Pinkie is a Packer Backer? And for some reason it doesn't surprise me the Celestia would date Tom Brady :trollestia:

2094105
Just kidding
...well, sort of...
lets just say there will be shipping.

2093848 Sweet, thanks man. Can't wait to see what you've got planned.


2093909 You'd be surprised at how clse that came to being the ending. Garbo said T rating, though.

Nice story. Did you watched some of BaldDumboRat's videos? Because your writing of Derpy reminds me of her...

2094111 Anything to do with the cover pic?

You know who's story I'd love to see in this? Leon Sandcastle's. Glad to see this up, keep goin and stay golden^^

2094283
Yes, I can say that two of the characters I'm using have their roles directly lifted from that picture, but I added my own somewhat unlikely ending to it. And the third pony is the Quill and Sofa guy, because he has to appear in every fic I write because he's the best pony. It's a self-imposed rule.
2094210
You'd have to ask Pick-Six.

2094210 I'm afraid that i have no idea who that is. I'll check 'em out, though.

2093909 You've been spamming this quite a bit. Please stop.

So do all of the chapters have shipping? :rainbowlaugh: Mine definitely does.

2095829
Let the guy spam. He can spam on my stories all he/she wants as far as I'm concerned. Stop being so righteous.

2096130
And mine. I hope someone doesn't, but in the end I think a lot of us will. I wish Seven was still in though. I don't think he was going to ship.

Ha, that was a fun read. I love the interaction that Trixie and Twilight have. One thing I did notice:

‘Maybe if the Ravens go down much more, I can convince Trixie to sneak upstairs with me and we can have a little fun of our own’

Shouldn't that be the 'Niners?

Good story, man!

2121796
Changed it for him, you're probably right about that.

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NO
Beyonce.......JUST NO

2123037
I don't know what you're talking about. She was hot. Like, really hot. Forget the meme with the awkward freeze frames. I was spellbound and rocking a boner the entire time.

2121796 Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I had a lot of fun reading yours too. And yeah, I noticed that right after Garbo published it. I forgot to tell him about that. So: Garbo, you should fix that typo that we both missed :ajbemused:

Edit: I see Garbo already fixed it. Welp, this is awkward :twilightsheepish:

Cheatin' 49ers. Had to cause a blackout 'cause they were getting killed...

2126434
it's only as awkward as you make it
2127214
true dat

Ill be honest. I don't like football. Like at all. But everything deserves a chance. Commence read!

2096130 whats wrong with shipping?^^

2192270 Absolutely nothing. I was just joking around with the other chapter writers about how a good portion of us wrote shipping chapters without consulting anyone else :rainbowlaugh:

2192648 Kinda figured that was it^^ lol^^ Gotta give you credit though^^ Havent seen Breaburn/Derpy before^^

2192717 Yeah that was an interesting chapter Pick-Six came up with. I thought it was better than mine. It was a lot of fun to read.

2193071 yours was pretty good too though^^ dont make yourself smaller than you are^^

Um... not sure what to think of this one. The end of the chapter was too rushed and the amounts that they were betting was FAR too high to be realistic. Plus fourteen-hundred thousand isn't a real number anyway. That's 1.4 million bits right there, am amount that I know that Shining doesn't have. I dunno, it took me out of the story.

Great to see this up, and completely forgot I wrote that fetuses eater line:twilightsheepish:. and if anyone reading this has any question or criticism about the chapter feel free to ask/tell me. :pinkiehappy:

..... my day has been made!!!! :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Oh, Shining. Us Whovians have a saying to those who opposes our here.

"Lesson learned: THE DOCTOR ALWAYS WINS!!"

2240327
I was tempted to take it out, but I didn't. Sorry it took me this long to edit. I did it all today because I decided I'd been shuffling it around for too long. That and I also realized I haven't written mine :twilightoops:. Whatev, I'll get to that.

2242345
Youse commenting will has the gooderest grammars

2242387 no problem at least It's up, and looks like it being liked more than my other stories so im happy!

"Mother bucking fetus eater!"

Not going to lie, that line made me happy and depressed simultaneously.

2240327 This fic is cute but it's really rushed and feels odd compared to the lighter tone of the other fics. mostly the fetus eater comment and the incredibly misogynistic line about the there actually being a law saying he can bet his wife like she's property rather than a person.

As well it's riddled with typos and grammar issues. If nothing else it really needs to be better spellchecked.:derpytongue2:

2256292
I would take personal offense to that last comment as it questions my editing capabilities, but I didn't edit it as thoroughly as I usually do, so no harm done.

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