After being supposedly 'reformed', Discord returns to Canterlot with Princess Celestia. Once there he realizes that it would be a long run before the ponies would accept him. Shunned and mistrusted, Discord slowly returns to his older ways.
This time there is no holding back.
BeauZoe helped with story development and slight editing, editing help also provided by Boolyboo.
This is gonna be fun~
A dark past...some ponies are too narrow-minded to realise that those who spread disharmony might have had such a past...
Awaiting further releases.
All hell breaks loose...
IT'S FINALLY HERE
I like where this is going.
It has begun....
NUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!
Well, this is bullshit.
It seem as if the misguided harmony has succeeded.
But will they realise their sin? They must!
Awaiting further releases.
well...this was dissapointing
SO MANY ONIONS I AM CUTTING. SO MANY ONIONS.
good god man, this was amazing. i... i think I'll go crawl to a corner now....
so many onions...
Writing the fight scene must have been fun. You can have Discord do whatever you want to without interfering with the story.
feels bad man...
feels bad
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It was really fun to write the fight scene, but hard at some points.
So sad ending...
And still even if Discord lost to them, ponies lost too. Eventually mane6 will die. And considering how weak princesses now...
burn them all...kill them all
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...I am disappoint.
That was a sad-happy ending. Although I would've loved to see the visitor and that visitor's conversation.
God damned feels. Would be even worse if you showed an elderly Fluttershy dying next to Discord' s statue
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Hmmm....
247743 Hmmmm indeed
Those feels,
Where'd he go? And awww! Poor Discord.
Hmmm, will there be a follow up to this? I'd love to see how this goes, but seems like there's most likely no chance for it eh?
Excellent addition.
Will there be a follow up, I wonder...?
Excellent work, dear Author.
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mebbeh.
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The last paragraph and sentence make no sense.
You dumb.
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no ur dum
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u wot m8, i wrek u swer on my mums lyef
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u a cheeky cunt m8
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m8 its ogre now!
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I have a feeling this is going ogreboard.
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It is a bit ogrebearing isn't it?
Is this what you do when you're not on Steam? tsk tsk.
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Actually, I wrote most of this stuff when I was chatting with some people on Steam.
2643440 So you're constantly on Steam?
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Not constantly, but very often.
2645998 We should play together sometime.
Why u do this?? well good story
Well shit just got real!
2465552 exactly what I was going to say.
Goodness! This is killing me! Well done, sir. Well done.
Why do you hurt me like this?! I am crying my eyes out in the dark right now! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! THE FEEEEEEEEEEELLLLLLLLSSSSS!!!!!
ooooooohhhh!!!!!😨
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