This story will chronicle Ditzy's growth from her beginnings in Fillydelphia growing up with her mom, to eventually moving to PonyVille and becoming the iconic character we know today. Ditzy wasn't always as clumsy as she is, this story tells us how she came to be along with a few other surprises as well
This is my first fan fic so please don't be too critical, the intro isn't very good and I don't know if I can help that, just keep reading until the second chapter and I guarantee you will find it more enjoyable :)
100% Ditzy for fans of the wonky eyed pony
Chapters (8)
You did well with this, intro's a smidgen uninteresting but beyond that it's very good.
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Jee thanks, I always find intros very hard to write, I was worried that the whole story would be boring to read but to my surprise I'm glad you liked it :)
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Thank you for the kind words, as for the grammer it was due to being lazy =3 I fixed up some of the grammer and capitalization mistakes so hopefully it is less of a chore to read :
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Ditzy Doo.
Not bad. Hoping for more. Also on an off hand note, did you know that Ditzy has a voice roll in the newest MLP and RD calls her Derpy?
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The voice makes her sound retarded, if it was a bit high pitched it would work.
The Name.
She was called it by Rainbow Dash, the same pony who calls Twilight 'egghead' and Scottaloo 'snips'.
She is never that nice, so you expect her to be truefull about a pony with different eyes.
So still Ditzy.
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Yeah I heard about that and it happened the day I wrote this as well :/
But I'm not going to repeat what the delightful young fellow above me wrote since he did put it quite elegantly
148405 Seriously, enough. Her name is Derpy Hooves. Deny all you want, but her page has "Derpy Hooves" as her official name that the cast uses. Rainbow Dash said the name because IT'S HER NAME, not to be rude; she called Twilight an "egghead" only once or twice. Nice try, but you can't dodge all of what's written. The blonde-haired walleyed Pegasus is and will be forever known as Derpy Hooves. Anyone who disagrees are in denial.
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If you have an accident and lose your leg and every calls you stumpy, and then someone from another country, writes a list of names, and only hear's the person calling stumpy and then decieds becuase you look like that it must be your name.
It's the same here.
It was suppost to be Ditzy Doo but then the fans started calling her Derpy hooves.
And giving her such a low pitched voice doesn't help.
Good day.
This is good.
Good day.
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Why thank you very much =3
I wasn't even trying to make it that funny so thank you for the confidence booster :
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You don't know the half of it :)
DERPY!!!
Awesome! U write good!
And hay, 1st comment!
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Thanks hehehe
And your a good reader
Oh and writer