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Star Grazer


Just a brony/gamer/other guy wanting to try his hoof at writing something. Hopefully.

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Pondering life brings many ideas.

Even a good idea can end in a mistake.

But for every mistake, there is a success.

And for every success there is a story.

Love of a blue angel brought me here.

And this is the story of that success, and the mistake that started it.

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Picture by lotothetrickster.

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Comments ( 30 )

Is it just me or is the entire story in italics?

That was short, sweet and heartwarming. Very nice! :moustache:

She's not cyan! She is COLUMBIA BLUE.

I think people misunderstand the whole "Wonderbolt Academy" thing. She doesn't immediately become a Wonderbolt if she passes - it's just a summer camp kind of thing where the Wonderbolts train you and possibly identify future candidates. As far as we're aware, Dash is still too young to be a Wonderbolt - after all, she is the best YOUNG flyer in Equestria.

That was cute and I needed something light like this after reading the last update of "What We Lose" (both amazing stories btw).

I always find these italicized letter-based stories interesting, and I think you pulled it off quite well!

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that has never been revealed, so you can twist it a little

I like oneshots, cause you can read them anytime. RIL'd.

Is this Twidash in the competition?

1975528

Indeed. It's written in more of a letter/journal format, which is why there's not all that much description.

1975907

Thanks!:twilightsmile:

I really do love the picture, and it melts my heart every time I look at it.

1975907

Yeah? Well, cyan sounds cooler, so cyan! :rainbowwild:

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Actually, it is not. I don't really plan on joining the competition, primarily because I don't think I have the skill and otherwise because there are many others out there that I feel write much better stories than I, but don't get the coverage they deserve.

1979030 You don't have to enter this one, but you really have nothing to lose. Conjure up a good idea, find a neat way to present it, and pack in a few surprises for the reader.

I was wondering why it was italic for the first few paragraphs.
Sudden epiphany strikes: "Ahh, it's a diary/journal thing". Then the bit about the journal not being able to talk back made me laugh more than it should have due to me guessing what the idea behind the fic was.
On another note, this was a cute fic, also, this is definitely deserving of at least an entry in the TwiDash comp.
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i love ^-^ ive always figured that when it comes down to choosing between the bolts or her friends, her friends would win. :rainbowdetermined2:

Awesome story. Wish I could write like this. The leeway I would make in my studies if I could bend the emotions of my readers like this. :twilightsmile:

My my my, what do we have here? A romance that didn't drive me (a 14 year old dude (who likes ponies) away. THIS is talent, and I think i'm getting used to lesbo romances. Go figure.

Very nice.

Though I don't agree with two of the same gender becoming a couple, I do love reading about love, it's one reason why I'm wrighting my story. Nice work BTW.

2031226 Homophobic bastard. Fuck you.

2129203 You should be more tolerant of other people's beliefs. I may not agree with that person, but they are entitled to their opinion.

I normally don't enjoy such short shipfics, since they are usually rushed, but this one was very nice. Cute and sweet. Good job. :twilightsmile:

1981240 my heart cant take it...

Very well written.

The poetic description made me read this.
This is certainly a story that you cant miss.
The story was great and very entertaining.
I dont think the memory of this great story will start fading!

i should never have looked past this story, i should have read it when i saw it but i put it off
stupid brain, never listens to my other side, or one of the other sides:pinkiecrazy:

AMAZING! No other words but amazing! aside from a few spelling mistake, there isn't anything bad! One of the best twidash! And I'm happy!:pinkiehappy::twilightsheepish::twilightsmile::yay::rainbowkiss:

3609332 mistakes*
Oh the irony! :rainbowlaugh:

3820868 ... This was... totally planned. Yes, I ,uh... intentionnaly made a spelling mistake to make it ironically funny... :eeyup:.

This was... weird, but certainly cute:heart:

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This is exactly my reaction. I hate homophobia, but that person also didn't specifically come across that way. Still, people are entitled to their beliefs. We can disagree, but not hate, unless they come across as spiteful.

Then full ostracism is acceptable.

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