Rainbow Dash made a promise that she'll protect everypony. Bound by the element of loyalty the effect of those words caused more to change in her then just a mindset. Now stuck in and endless cycle of death and rebirth she shares her story.
First IS story
Third IS story
This one has the gore tag because I didn't want to skimp on any details. (It's honestly not that bad though. Think early Mortal Kombat games.)
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Ouch. What a way to not go.
Well, if the first one was any indication, I shall thoroughly enjoy this story
2441460 doomed to live for eternity
harsh!
jesus... I've often contemplated the horrors of immortality, but this put them into words better than I ever could
I. Am. Speechless. I have a couple of questions lol im not really speechless. So does this mean immortal beings can truly die? And also Is RD still alive? And if she is is she staying with the demons on the barren rock? And couldn't she just escape the demons grasps? And where did the 'demons' come from? And is RD now a demon?
And one more thing, who is this guy/girl asking the questions to rainbow dash?
AND FINALLY OMFG A AWESOME STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THUMBS UP VERY CREATIVE AND A NEW OUTLOOK ON IMMORTAL BEINGS!!! I GIVE U 10/5 MOUSTACHES FOR AN EXCELLENT STORY!!!!!
In the rainbow factory,
Where your fears an horrors come true
In the rainbow factory
Where not a single soul gets through...
Is the turning of Pegasus blood into rainbows a reference to that song?
2441905 Yes, actually. There was another reference in there but I cant quite remember it.
2441836 The bit at the end was Luna answering the questions of her offspring of unidentified gender and unidentified origin. I added that last bit to offer some closure as to what happened. As for immortal beings dying, the answer is yes. They can die if the situation arises. RD is still alive and it's unknown if anything else is alive on the planet; including the demons. RD is just your average pony (aside from the undying part) so she can't really get away from the demons after they caught her. She is not a demon and the demons came from Tartarus when it broke open upon Celestia's death and the planet's magic being drained.
2441647 I tend to do that. I guess I've just read to many stories where the OC/humans/ponies become immortal and it just ends... Well aside from that one story but I forget what it was called. The 2 main characters were humans named Anon and Mous if that's any help.
2441625 2441460 Thanks to the ponies venturing off into space anyway. Luna and her space program kinda ruined Rainbow's chances at finding peace... Of course if they fly into an asteroid field then things might happen... but who knows?
2441504 I hope this was thoroughly enjoyed then!
2442256 We shall see... I found it right before I was goin out for a ride on my motorcycle.
Favourited for sure. This is an awesome story, hope to see you continue this.
2442270 Haha well then see you on the other side.
2442280 This story won't be continued but the next story in the series will be made... eventually...
Oh our Luna, the feels thou hast inspired in us.
. Next, we were as 
. Now, we art as 
Initially, we were as
2442462 Luna thanks thee. As do I.
Now that is a depressing story. Thanks. I needed to feel depressed before I got back to writing my own Dark fic. It helps me put feelings within the story that things are Dark and the light is gone. I like reading Dark fics and this one was very good.
2442918 You know its funny... That's almost exactly how it worked for me when I wrote this. Even more so for the first one of these I wrote since I managed to get that one out all in one go.
Gotta say though, I don't quite like writing these stories... but I digress.
I'm guessing the song was Safe and Sound.
2453636 Nope. The first song is a homage to Discord, the title of the second song is Jack and Diane and the 3rd song is American Pie.
That was really good. Not at al what I was expecting from it when I saw it but Ioved it so much. I think it's a little sad that Rainbow got all the blame for trying to just rest in peace forever like her friends. But hey this while story was depressing, but easily one of the best I've ever read not as sad as MLD (but then again for me nothing is) but its so close. Also another thing the pony at the end that was talking was Luna right. Surely of all ponies she should understand what Rainbow felt like living forever, but I guess she was never all alone like Das was. But yeah amazing story I loved every moment of it 10/10. I wish I could better describe this amazing story but that's all I have excuse me now while I cry my eyes out.
2458001 Thanks! MLD is in a league of its own so anything that can do so much as stand it's ground against it is a success for me. Really wishing I could have gotten this out in more timely manner though. I had to go back and reread it to make sure everything flowed nicely. With Pinkie's story I just wrote it and published it all in the span of about an hour.
I haven't actually read Pinkie's story yet but if its half as good as this one I can tell I'm gonna have a great read
2458186 I couldn't really say which is better tbh since I wrote both of them.
XD yeah I guess that's true. I haven't had the time to rea it yet (I'm just always in this site at night) but I will get around to it. I just wish my story could hold a candle to this amazing fic
2458462 heh just keep writing and you'll get there eventually.
2458515 I will. I've only got one story out right now and it's okay I've gotten some good responses from several people. So I do plan on writing more (in fact I'm adding some on to it currently while in editing it) and if it wouldn't be too much to ask I'd love for you to give it a look and give me some pointers so I can become a better writer
I'm having a hard time accurately describing this fic.
Ill go with "friggin awesome" for now.
~Vortex
2479160 Works for me!
Wow, eternal life can be a real pain in the flank
nice story!
Too bad Luna blamed pony kind's death on RD. I mean, she didn't mean to destroy the world!
2887217 While there wasn't meant to be malice behind the statement, if you doomed the world to darkness people would be pissed at you regardless of the circumstances.
2884489 That it can be... Unless of course you're a force of nature that can traverse through all of existence on a whim and have the power to create dimensions and realities as you see fit.
2887389
You sir, have just broken my brain box
2891674 That's the concept behind the story that spawned Call of Power. It's on hiatus though because I just have no desire to do any world/character building with it anymore.