• Member Since 20th Jan, 2012
  • offline last seen Apr 12th, 2012

jtylerg


Hi, I'm Josh.

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Spike finally wins the heart of Rarity, but his happiness is short lived before disaster strikes pushing him far beyond the brink of insanity.
(Based off of a short story written by my favorite band, Alesana)

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 15 )

Wait, what, :derpytongue2: Did he kill her or what? This is confusing... (or I'm just very stupid)

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It's one of those story's that makes you think, but no.. he didn't kill her, he just thought he did in his fit of insanity....Spitfire killed her

Ohhhh, now it makes sence :P :raritydespair: Poor Rarity.

Well, this creeped me out but interested me. Favorited.

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It was a good story, but I'm curious... what was Spike's reasoning for killing most of the Apple Family?

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Wow gee thanks. Way to go RUINING THE WHOLE DAMN STORY BEFORE I EVEN BEGAN READING IT

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He asked so i answered :p
you shouldn't have read the comments first.. sorry

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Well in his insanity he began to unleash his rage on everyone, it could have been anyone, but he just happened to be at Sweet Apple Acres when he snapped.

Reminds me of "American Psycho"
In the whole sense of "main character deludes himself into thinking he murdered anyone"

146057 Oh, I see. That is understandable. I was kinda confused if I had missed something because he didn't seem to care too much about it afterwards. I'll add spoilers to my post as well.:twilightsheepish:

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Yeah, i learned after the guy above me got mad because of one of my posts without spoilers /:

Couldve been better, bet eh. You wanted to a psychological thriller here and I can tell, but you have to spread those things out, this was way to short and honestly the suspense wasn't even there. Any pain, sorry, or anger i could've felt from certain situations was too short to digest really.

I'm guessing the story is based on The Emptiness. I love that album.

why do I get the feeling that this person made this fanfic just to hate on spitfire:rainbowhuh:

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