After a misfired spell that turned all the planet's population into anthrofied ponies, I Prof. Prodigy Skyfire, continued my hard quest into regaining my memory. With the help of my assistant Strawberry, it seems like that dream would become a reality....if it wasn't as difficult as I expected. Then, one day, we both come across a blue box, a telephone booth from the looks of it. And an even odder chestnut-colored stallion gave the feeling he knew more about me than he let on. Who is he....and does he know the truth behind my hidden past?
Really, REALLY don't use different color text. I wouldn't really mind it but it's very unnecessary, and people on this site absolutely detest it, so you may receive some unnecessary down votes because of it.
I like the idea (and rthe title of the story), but proper grammar says you can't have 2 different characters speaking in the same paragraph.
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Two characters in the same paragraph? Hmm.....never actually tried writing a sentence with just one character before. Might need to try it.
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I'd say so too, 'cause, you know, proper grammar. yeah.