A thousand of years of life experience would no doubt teach Princess Celestia much about romantic relationships, and that is exactly what Twilight wishes to learn from her beloved mentor. When Princess Luna catches wind of these lessons, however, she sees a chance to relight the fires of love within her sister again. But when a “one-time fling” turns into a life-long infatuation, Luna and a reluctant Cadance must race to reverse the effects of their meddling before Twilight finds herself in a most compromising position!
But can she truly resist the total affection of a goddess?
Chapters (6)
Needs more content. Yet it's shaping up good so far.
I'm liking this so far, I'll give it my usual probationary favorite
Came expecting Crisis Core.
Left disappointed.
Awesome. But Twi just out of the blue asking for romance advice, unlikely. Oh and great molestia picture
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That... isn't Molestia.
Hah! This looks like fun, I'll be looking forward to more.
You also probably want to know: I was sent here from the feature box! Nice one!
42 books in Rarity's collection, eh? I saw what you did there.
Good job with the slow build up. I'm going to keep my eye on this.
That wordcount...
1957605 The Codex leaves no room for doubt.
i need another amazing chapter, stat!
"Gift of The Goddess"? Is that a Crisis Core reference?
[Edit] Anyway, you have piqued my interest. Quality Twilestia is always welcome.
UGH. FINE. Another romance fic added to my favorites.
This story shows promise. I am favoriting this and shall be following you.
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GO AWAY, LEANDROS, NO ONE LIKES YOU
First story is a Twilestia? Nice
Looks good so far. I'll make sure to keep an eye on it
Isn't it amazing how easy it is to convince someone to do something they already want to do?
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(especially if they do not know that they want to do it?
Let the meddling commence!
This looks to have promise. I am not usually a fan of Twilestia but if it's done well, which this has the appearance of being so, it can be an enjoyable read. I do hope the whole story is as good as the first chapter hints it will be. Good luck with this venture I shall be following it to the end
This can only end well
Twilight is Celestia's sister? That's how I read this... I expect you meant Luna's sister.
I'm going to give this an early thumbs up and a definite gold star. This can only end well!
Minor corrections:
Rarity is here to see you. Shes down in the lobby waiting. = She's (She is)
I know a lot about romance! Its...uh... = It's (It is)
The concept of romance (and it’s ensuing partnership) has still eluded me. = its (impersonal possessive)
She is hardly ‘in-experienced’. = inexperienced (doesn't need hyphen)
1959580 Yeah you're right... I'll have to re word that. Thanks.
1959585 Attended to those corrections. Thanks for pointing them out.
Faved and thumbed up.
Good, I like this, I like this very much, so far atleast. Do not dissapoint me! :D
1959548 true
I'm really hoping the title is a reference to LOVELESS....oh god please be a reference.
Sneaky Luna? Best Luna.
The more must go on!
There is a grammatical error in the very first sentence, which is always a bad sign for a story.
should be
No, if'n yer open ta' suggestions, Ah like this 'ere anecdote. Ergo, if ya' could be injuncted ta' provide a memorable scene involvin' a Twilestic moment, then it may behoove ya' gifted art summation.
Oh god, this won't end well...
^This is as far as I've reached^
Wow, slow down Twi, but i'm sure it will only get worse.
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Do not quote the Codex at me, whelp!
What the balls did I just read!?!?!
I offer thee this silent sacrifice.
1958683 noob
So Twilight wants to sleep with Moles-er-Celestia? This is not correct. Mol-Celestia should be more understanding of this.
1961549 Lol I read like 500,000 words this week
1961543 Eeyup
>>GenoX11
Now if she could figure out why Luna is pressuring her to do it without being oblivious.
1961563 i read like over 9000. I know that.
1958683 It's 6000 words. what do you want, a pamphlet?
1961678 pretty sure a pamphlet has less words.
1961699 that would be the point of the comment. Now if you want more, there are several already completed Twilestias to browse on the site.
This fic has the sweet smell of total awesomeness about it...
A scheming, slightly mischievous Luna. Celestia caught by surprise by Twilight... Ow yes, I am enjoying this one!
nice word choice, and descriptive writing. I love it! and Celestia being caught by suprise is a new one!
Great story though, I'll give it that. *Tracking*
Should be "social"
The word "ago" should go somewhere in here
was I the only one reminded of the french model from the internet commercial when Rarity said she was dating a colt that looks almost exactly like the one from the one novel? Like, I'm not even going to be surprised if it turns out she was his pen pal for awhile, and he copied the picture and sent it to her so she'd like him...