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How do you think weather is controlled? Pegasi moving clouds? Unicorns altering the changing of weather in their midst? Maybe, of the skew of different occupations. But how did it start? What caused bright droughts and gray downpours? It may be farther back than you think. For three titans, of the land, of the sea, and of the sky. The former of all three had created the land to begin with. Using its force to drought the land and raise massive continents, while its counterpart created downpours and put roaring oceans into bloom.

Now, normally, this causes contradiction. And where there is contradiction, there is fighting. The two couldn't settle their quarrels and several millenniums ago, engaged in a brutal fight to the death. However, the final titan, the being of the sky, resolved their qualm, sending the beast of the sea to the darkest depths of the deepest ocean, and the beast of the earth into the pit of the largest volcano.

Now, it is the time under Princess Celestia and Luna's dual-rule, and Twilight Sparkle is preparing important events as it is the week-eve of Hearths Warming Eve. However, a sudden surge of spontaneous squalls and droughts begin to violently wrack the area. Rounding up her friends, Twilight approaches the princess to ask for help, but as she tries to rack her mind for an explanation, one of Equestria's largest catastrophes is in development.

A Crossover with da' Pokemons.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 48 )

Balls.

I had the lines of the two legendaries colour-coded so people could understand who was talking. Unfortunately, it didn't transfer over from Google Docs. Sorry about that :twilightsheepish:

1998309

Says the person who originally suggested I use Google Docs to write. :trollestia:

Awesome! I was thinking of doing a fic with the Regi trio

1998855

The Creation Trio or the Legendary Golems (Regice, Regirock, Registeel and Regigigas) will be planned as a sequel to this one :3

1999066 Well this my original idea = The golems have awoken from years ago, creating mischief for some reason. Regice is causing blizzards in Ponyville and Canterlot, and all of *Spike's* friends are frozen solid, including Twilight and Celestia. So Spike sets off to cure the towns under the golems' harsh weather, only to find out in the end that by doing so, he has awoken the evil king of them all...

1999097

Only that they weren't actually evil, they were created as guardians for some sort of purpose. In the movie that they debuted, they guarded the Tree of Life, however, 'Gigas might only seem evil because it controls the other three and uses its own ability to defend.

I know too much about Pokemon lore. .-.

1999226 Never said they were evil. I guess I typed it wrong. They were trying to prevent Regigigas from awakening.

1999265

Ah, I suppose that makes sense, then.

This would most assuredly benefit from an editor.

1999660

As in it's in dire need of an editor or it doesn't require one?

1999766

Dire need. Like, 'rhinoceroses on the verge of extinction' dire.

Well, maybe not that dire, but still dire. I would suggest someone who knows enough about the lore of Pokemon, but also has wicked awesome grammar and story-telling skills.

1999869

Sweet rump of Celestia I wouldn't figure it'd be that bad.

I mean, sure, I have some literary issues but I certainly don't think it's that bad. But, eh, problems can be abound. I'm certain that the two Pokes' can't use telepathy, but has it ever been proved true or untrue? Please, point out at least a few of the issues contained in the story.

1999904

I'm saying get someone who can perfect the grammar and the story-telling. The lore is fine, but you'll need and editor who knows about it so that it comes out amazing.

For example, the fact that they have telepathy is fine. Groudon and Kyogre clashing in Equestria? Even more fine. But everyone needs an editor/proof-reader/prereader. They help take the lump of stone that is your story, and refine it into a diamond.

I would suggest looking at your favorite stories and seeing if their authors are willing to lend a hand. That's what I did when I began writing More Than a Stallion, and it paid off.

1999928

I see, thanks for the heads up. :twilightsmile:

2005212

*LAWLNOPEHIPSTERJOKELAWL*

You could say that "Fan-Literature" makes me appear as a more...mmmm..."distinguished" gentleman. :trollestia:

2005246

*Lawl nope hipster joke lawl*

It was to imply that it could paint that I write "Fan literature" because "Fanfiction" is too mainstream.

Since the internet harshly abused this joke, I decided not to make it.

2020111

Who hasn't? :rainbowlaugh:

But I'll have to be able to easily understand the story of it if you were expecting me to make a story about Yveltal/Xerneas.

Nah I'm expecting you to finish ridely in ponyville 2020281

2020408

If I saw that movie I'd probably cum in my pants.

I'm sorry, but it's true. .-.

Pokemon gen IV pokemon X and Y at pokemon .com

Oh balls, Groudon and Kyogre are back. This is going to be good! :eeyup:

MORE DAMN YOU MORE!!! :flutterrage:
Sorry just that you cut it off right when it was getting good. please update this soon!

When was this chapter published?

2308276

3-ish, I think?

I don't really pay attention to the time, especially on weekends and now that I'm on my Spring Break. :twilightsheepish:

2309571

Yup.

3 in the afternoon, though.

2309780 Huh. No wonder there are no new chapters. Heh:twilightblush:

MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

1998309 You can write on FIM fiction!?!? My life is a lie...

2474397

You are able to write on here...but...

In my case, where I typically find myself uncomfortable with writing entire chapters in HTML-format, well, I stick with Google Docs.

They're not very different. However, colored words don't transfer over from GD.

When Groudon and Rayquaza have spoken, they're supposed to have what they say highlighted in red and green respectively, but GD acts like a bitch and doesn't let it work. :rainbowwild:

1998300 any chance you could fix it so I could even have prayer of an idea?

2514063 you can fix it on Fimfiction. it's easy.

3666632

I've been caught up with other things and the lack of adequate writing space where I won't get caught. (/.3.\)

I absolutely love this story because it talks about my favorite legendary Pokemon Kyogre, Groudon and Rayquaza its a bit of a shame that the story didn't talk about Deoxys but it was still 20% more awesome:raritystarry:

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