Everypony loves Pinkie Pie but she's just about the worst employee in all Ponyville. Cup Cake & Carrot Cake finally have to put their hoof down.
Contains non-sexual disciplinary spanking.
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Why do the Cakes pay Pinkie? Give her party supplies food and board and that's her pay check.
1960057 -Tangerine Blast
We have seen Pinkie with money (buying cider in the Flim-Flam brother's episode) so somepony must be paying her.
I imagine she does get a salary from the Cakes...but she spends more than she earns on silly stuff like party canons, welcome wagons & parade floats, so she's constantly in debt, paying off the advances she's taken. I also figure she gets tips for well organized parties, which she promptly blows on more silly shit.
1961109 I think this is the case too but I don't think it should be. That is all. Your story is fantastic by the way.
For some crazy reason this reminded me of the Simpsons and I couldn't stop laughing!
I must say i felt worse for carrot than pinkie. One he had to do the spanking and second, he did take most of the damage from pinkie's goofing off.
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Quite an interesting piece, and something I could definitely see being a possibility behind the scenes. Your work seems to have a lot more work put into it than mine does.
Pinkie having to take responsibility for all the crazy shit she keeps pulling off without ANY consequences? You're my hero for that alone. I've always wondered why she hasn't been evicted from town or incarcerated for all of her random acts of terrorism and vandalism.
The only part I felt really took away from the story was that silly bit about the ice block. If you'd left it out, the emotional charge wouldn't have dissipated with Pinkie's randomness. If I'd been in the Cake's horseshoes when she did it, I'd have put her right back on the bed and continued the spanking. Right now it felt like the whole spanking was forgotten by Pinkie the moment it ended. She shouldn't have been going 'owie owie owie' but more in the sobs and sorries territory.
That said, the ending with the twins was a very touching moment and I would maybe have wanted to see the Cake's actually spy the scene without Pinkie noticing. Then they would have known they did the right thing even more.
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This. Exactly this, almost word-for-word.
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So noted. If I had the resources to animate this story that bit may have worked better but Pinkie-style craziness does not translate well to text. It's a purely visual gag.
Thanks for the comments & critique. The Apple sisters are up next...
This pissed me off for one pinkie seems to be good at her job in many episodes of the show and she takes care of the foals from time to time as well as that she brings so much business to sugarcube corners that it's stupid to punish her sorry but if this story had to be done have it take place on the rock farm one downvote.
I would have enjoyed that episode a LOT more if they had done that. Truth be told, I can't stand Pinkie Pie. Which is partly why I enjoyed this. So, thank you for writing it.
Trust me, parents don't spank their kids anymore. Trust me, I have African parents..Anyway nice concept.
Wonderful story
100% with the Cakes on this, though spanking a... let's say twenty tear old young lady would be super awkward. Still, I'd probably be tempted in the same situation. Very well-written.
What's interesting is, in this situation, it makes sense some people would gravitate towards doing this... having an immature and out of control, yet well-meaning, young protégé would be a frustrating experience, especially trying to teach that person responsibility and self-control if they hadn't learned it already, and, honestly... spanking him/her makes sense as a last resort. In the military at one time Pinkie would've been flogged, which is more along the lines of what Mayor Mare wanted to do
The whole criticism about the visual gag. In the Cakes place, I'd probably do the same thing the guy said. Perhaps writing the gag out in a way similar to "Pinkie imagined herself setting on a block of ice, but didn't want to procure one as she didn't want to push her luck" might've kept the momentum going for the scene a little better. The gag didn't detract... made me smile, if anything.
I know this story was written a while ago, but I'm going to check out your other stuff as time goes on, as this shows a lot of promise. It's a very awkward situation handled believably. Personally don't believe in spanking, but its nice to read a non-sexual take on disciplining a character that lacks structure and is somewhere between late teenage years and early adulthood.
I thought they didn't pay her but give her an allowance. I also thought that her working for them was payment for her room. It seems stupid to pay her and make her pay for her room. She is basically living there for free.
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I didn't know what to expect with this story. But I liked it. *clap* Congrats, this now has an extra fave.
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Go away, troll. There's nothing for you here.
"Oh who would lock you up?" Mrs. Cake retorted. "You know the Mayor herself wanted to have Pinkie Pie bent over and horsewhipped after that ridiculous incident with all those duplicates...and I think she'd have gone through with it if Twilight Sparkle hadn't talked her out of it!"
...I have read this story so many times and still missed this.
Also...would you consider writing a story based on that paragraph? And if not, would you be willing to let me do it?
I feel a story along those lines would be too good to miss writing!!
And one more thing....just how big is Carrot's apron pocket if it can fit a cutting board???
This is really ooc for me bc pinkie wouldn’t be nearly as irresponsible