To any critics that come to my page (omg thank you.), please see this story for my current skills. My first story, Star Crossed School Days, is over a year old and does not boast my finer works. Thank you for your time.
Sequel To Legends of Ponyville
Spark Storm bands together with the remaining changelings as they make their way home. What starts out as a diplomatic mission turns into heated confrontations on the sea as they stumble into the middle of an underwater coup. New allies and new enemies join the fray as Spark struggles to get his charges across the ocean.
It's sequel of something, because its look promising but in same time its look like sequel
1999191 *facepalm* I knew the title was missing something. Yes, it's the sequel to my story Legends Of Ponyville. Fixed the description XD
Dammit! Cliffhangers! And just when the story had me hooked. Keep up the good work.
2080396 Thanks very much!
people like saying Spark Storm....
awesome as always
2082467 It has a certain ring to it.
2082616 Thanks very much, I appreciate it.
LOL! That ending. PRICELESS!
MOAR
pls
2093282 This arc has gotten me more excited about writing than any arc before it, and the next chapter is in production ^^
something tells me that other peoples faces will be burnt of next chapter
loving it so far keep up the good work
2258506 =D Thanks so much, I appreciate that ^_^
For some god awful reason I want Ampelus and Spark to get together I really don't know why XD
What a Twist
still waiting on the nightmare moon stuff...
getting quite a few character's arent we.
2685665 :D This is world building.
Grogar eh?
and a few extra words in there.
*gasp*
Can it be?
For real?
Yes yes yes yes yes yes!!!
Sorry, gone to far.
X3 Not too far at all! That's right, I'm back!
Celestia... really? you haven't learned?
Pinkie... leave the walls alone!
Oh shit...
You tease!
Such a Tease! Aaaahhh!
Oh.. I'd know that kind of description anywhere. I simply cannot wait to find out what Lotus is up this time. Or i just wanna see some bloodshed. Can't figure out which...
Captain Pinkie Sparrow
I have a feeling lusus is going to be in a fight involving the princess, and at least one of spark storms group.
I don't want to be finished!but it was a long read. and was good
6410640 Should've responded to this sooner! Thank you for reading! Stay tuned, 'cause the next chapter will be up soon.
Woot new chapter glad to see this back.
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Woo thanks!
Well this is a welcome surprise. Was worried it was dropped.
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Nah. Nice long sabbatical, worked on me, had a couple kids, you know how it goes, lol. I'm glad there are still readers around to entertain :D
Dude nice well worth the wait
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Thanks! I'll try not to make the next chapter a four year wait XD
It's been a while, I'll have to re-read the story again from the beginning
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That's the best way to do it!