Fleur's Wager

Agri_Yob #1 · Mar 3rd, 2013 · 1 · ·

I still have an odd animosity for Fancypants, but god damn do I love Fleur!
And when I first read the part "Did you bring the Filly?" I had to scroll up to see if there was a dark/gore tag.
Then the logical side of my brain turned on.
Amazing story!

ray10k

ray10k #2 · Mar 3rd, 2013 · · ·

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... a sandwich? Really?

Still, an interesting story, and it makes me wonder what is going on in the shower. ;-)

supermark

supermark #3 · Mar 3rd, 2013 · · ·

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And i though i knew every fetish on the internet...

I learned a new one. And even if i don't wish to try this irl, the loving scene between them where beatifull and full of feelings.

By the way, i would love to see another story with a fetish for fancypants, and some more love scene.

Tundara

Tundara #4 · Mar 3rd, 2013 · 1 · ·

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Fleur gained my attention... Not enough Fleur stories out there.

Inferno demon Dash

Inferno demon Dash #5 · Mar 3rd, 2013 · · ·

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Huh.....that sandwhich must be so happy right now Very impressed, Gods, I wish I could write like you, you done a very great job bro, I loved it, a bit odd as I never seen this pairing before but long as it's not one of my most five hated then I'm down for any pairing, I'm so proud of you bro

Movie Reel

Movie Reel #6 · Mar 3rd, 2013 · · ·

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A surprisingly sweet story. Fancypants is his charming, caring self. Fleur is great, and the romance and relationship between the two is funny, believable, strange in some parts, but very sweet at heart. Like all relationships. I think we need more Fancy/Fleur fics.

Derecho

Derecho #7 · Mar 3rd, 2013 · · ·

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I totally thought it was going to be a piece of leather clothing, like a harness or something equally taboo. Genuine leather would probably be frowned upon in Pony culture.

The Fool

The Fool #8 · Mar 3rd, 2013 · · ·

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2204112

That was originally going to be much more ambiguous for a much more uncomfortably long time, but it didn't work out that way.

2204187

That foray with the Filly must have been messy. He could be helping her get clean in any number of ways.

2204228

The original title was Fleur's Fetish, though I'm still not sure if this is more an example of vore or food play. The latter is fairly common. The former is fairly impossible under normal circumstances. I have a vague idea what Fancypants's might be, but it's probably better left to the reader's imagination.

2204247

Damn right. I hope to read yours someday, but only when it's marked complete. Not only do I distrust incomplete stories in general, by the time a new chapter comes out, I've forgotten the events of the previous one. Fortunately for anyone who writes multi-chapter stories, myself included, most people don't think like me.

2204508

Oddity is my specialty! I like to think so, anyway. One future story will be about how Granny Smith is a fruit vampire. That said, I think I'm getting better at this whole pony-erotica-writing business, but now I'm curious what your five most hated pairings are, though I can assume Spike/Rarity and Twilight/Celestia are two.

2205562

Despite what the ratings say, I'm very happy with how this turned out, and I'm happy that you and the others are happy with it as well. It was going to be a single-scene comedy, but during drafting, it turned into a six-scene romance. Who was I to complain?

2205717

Oh, I'm sure it would, but not as much as preparing the flesh of your fellow sapient quadrupeds for consumption.

Tundara

Tundara #9 · Mar 3rd, 2013 · · ·

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2207531

Ha! Could be a long while then before you read mine then. I'm not too sure which method I prefer; reading completed stories, or the anticipation of waiting for the next chapter of a favourite story.

The Fool

The Fool #10 · Mar 3rd, 2013 · · ·

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2207598

A story worth calling a favorite is probably worth reading as it's written, but you'll never know unless you start, at which point there's no turning back--unless you're like most people, who feel no compulsion to finish what they start if they don't like it.

RohanSpartan

RohanSpartan #11 · Mar 4th, 2013 · 1 · ·

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A Mature Fleur de Lis fanfic?! OH. HELL. YES!!! I'm gonna jump on this like a morbidly obese woman jumps on a Chocolate Cake.

Fourpony

Fourpony #12 · Apr 18th, 2013 · 1 · ·

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2204247
I found this looking for more Fleur stories as well.

imagining herself as a Fillydelphia cheese steak.

A sandwich, I was cracking up at this. The concept was just ridiculous but I liked the closeness between the two described. Also, just the name "Fancypants" cracks me up, it seems so wrong for them to intimate then "Oh Fancypants" gets dropped. This was a great, ridiculous, sexy comedy.

Themaskedferret

Themaskedferret #13 · Apr 21st, 2013 · 1 · ·

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Pfft oh lawd. I recall seeing this fetish online but never thought I'd not only see it as ponies but also as an incredibly touching and gentle look at what my headcanon says Fleur and Fancy are truly like.

The Fool