There is a terrible storm ruining Rainbow Dash's day to prank Pinkie Pie. Spike and Rarity were supposed to go gem hunting that day, but they stay inside during the storm when all of a sudden there is a knock at the door.
Scootaloo has a part near the end.
Spike and Rarity have been dating for a while now.
Just a warning, some logic will get thrown out the window.
This takes place after Season 2 ignoring Season 3.
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all of a sudden, Spike wakes up to find he is kissing his pillow, which took the shape of Rarity..... again lol
So, we have a story called Rainbow's Tragedy and the first chapter is nothing but Spike/Rarity shipping? Color me confused. Generally, the main subject of the story should have at least some presence in the first chapter.
Also, where did this Spike/Rarity shipping come from? You kind of throw it at us without any explanation, which is hard to accept.
Well they sure do talk a lot!
Oh, I liked this one. Really cute.
Now I'm just waiting for everything to go completely wrong. Everypony will be depressed and Spike will commit suicide.
Heheheheh... Rainbow's Tragedy... and she doesn't even make an appearance in the first chapter. This is great!
I think I know what's about to happen, though.
This is actually quite interesting. I can't wai to see more of it.
Little to lovey-dovey, though. It took up most of the chapter.
hm... I'm not sure exactly where you're going here, but I will say that it is a good idea and it gives me an idea for a story you might not be writing, if you don't mind me crediting you on giving me the inspiration when/if I write it, that is?
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Go ahead.
1975183 I agree with you. On another note, what's the color of confusion?
Finally some Rainbow Dash!
I liked how she panicked when she realized she was in a hospital!
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If I woke up in the hospital, I think I would be like:
"Fuck. Now I'm going to either die, or the rest of my life will never be the same.
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Did you think Rainbow was going to die in this chapter?
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Nope. It didn't seem that way.
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Good, because that might happen in a later chapter
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You asshat!
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It is a TRAGEDY. Go look up the definition.
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Again though, I said maybe
I probably won't.
Someone is going to die though.
Who that is... You'll have to find out!
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SPOILERS!!!
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Dang it! Now you know the entire story!
NOT!
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You're wrong! I know everything... EVERYTHING! EVERYTHING!!!
Two things, first "gentleman" is wrong. Gentlecolt, stallion, drake, or dragon would work, but they're not human, Second the conversations feel forced and unnatural.
I love it
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Thank you!
Glad you enjoyed it!
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Glad you enjoy it!
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Thank you for the feedback. Will work on it.
Great so far! There is some missing punctuation and incorrect spelling here and there, but nobody can do everything perfectly. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Thanks! Glad you enjoy it!
How the heck is she able to walk properly?
Ok, but this was great. I liked it. Listen to Path_of_cloud. He's always right!
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Well you didn't seem to have a problem with him holding her hoof in chapter 1...
What happened huh?
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Shuuut uuuuuup......
What do you mean "What happened"?
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You complain about it in chapter 3 but don't complain about it in chapter 1.
Reason?
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denver.mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/img/mlfw4641-Because_I_Dont.jpg
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No, I didn't think so.
reall how stupid is that guy its rainbow freaking dash!! everyone knows her!
I hate doing this but,
The speech marks start too early here.
Plus, an enraged Rarity? Chapter 5, what happened?
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I can't believe I missed that, thanks.
I feel so stupid right now.
2748279 Don't feel stupid
Also I just realised I was the first comment on Chapter 4 
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Finally! I have internet connection again!
But anyway... Cool chapter. I'm not gonna lie. It wasn't the best so far, but it was good enough. You took a strange turn, but perhaps you have something going on. What do I know?
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With this chapter, I was trying to write a chapter that would both fit Scootaloo's and Rainbow Dash's character. Unfortunately I don't have much experience so that kind of didn't help.
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Eeh, you did pretty good.
dang this chapter was very sad
"What was that noise?" Metal Gear Solid, anyone?
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*knock knock*
"!"
"What's that noise!?"
...a little while later
"It was just my imagination". As Snake is behind him ready to knock him out or assassinate him.