Pinkie Pie tells a reporter the story of how she left home at a young age to explore the world before she came to Ponyville. Will the story of her past have a positive impact on his future?
Author's Note: This is my first piece of fiction that I have written in a while, so it was has been pretty tough for me to write. Even after this story is complete, I hope to improve it. So please, if you don't like it or see something that you think is off, by all means tell me. I appreciate any kind of feedback, good or bad.
I am telling this story using dialogue, which is also something new to me. In any case, I hope you enjoy the story as much as I have enjoyed writing it.
Chapters (4)
He pressed his hands against his chest to keep his heart from leaping out.
Hands? HANDS? What are hands?
Ack! I can't believe I missed that! My brain had a momentary collapse.
When will you update??????
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Wow I didn't think anyone would be asking for to the update! I will be updating tomorrow!
Nice first chapter SanityLost, I will sure track this story and I loved the part when Pinkie said “Okay, I was conceived in a small house on a rock farm.” I started
all over the floor so really nice job man.
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Thank you! I am really happy you liked it, I hope you like the next chapter that comes after this one. I'm glad someone else other than me likes my weird sense of humor.
Salt Lick City, huh? Well lets see what Pinkie brings to this city, hopefuly not choas! Now I'm wondering how is this city that Pinkie Pie visted first than Ponyville.
(Lyra) - See Bon Bon, humans do exist!
(Bon Bon to self) - Oh Celestia...not this again...
*sigh*
(Lyra) - These ponies talk about people! That's another word for humans!
(Bon Bon) - Lyra! They don't exist, how many times does your therapist have to tell you - how many times do I have to tell you?
(Lyra to self) - But they do...I know it...
((Yeah...my way of letting you know that you wrote people and person once or twice in here...
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Oops argh!
I will fix that, thank you for pointing that out. I hope you were able to enjoy the story despite that error.
146822 Oh I always enjoy a Pinkie fic!
I like the idea behind this one, and I think it's pretty funny.
Although, I can't help but notice a few spelling mistakes/ grammar problems which, if solved would definitely improve the fic. Have you considered getting a pre reader/ editor? I know having one helps tremendously; it can be pretty easy to miss these things and a second pair of eyes helps catch the silly mistakes.
Oooohhh SanityLost this was better than the first few chapters I was
throught out the chapter intill it got serious but when Pinkie fought that jerk all I could think is " 
yeah Pinkie hit him again hit him again" so good work.
I concur, it was better! Poor Pinkie though...
<<Happy Bronie>> I'm really that you liked the chapter! The next will be up soon!
<<Kumquat>> Oh don't worry about our favorite pink pony, she always seems to bounce back no matter what happens!
this is excellent, please keep it up
This chapter had me on the edge of my seat. Keep up the good work!
*starts reading after another story you wrote which impressed me utmost (D-I-V-O-R-C-E)*
LOOOL! I LOVE THIS STORY! keep it up!
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Hey guys, I am really happy you liked this story. Eventually I will get chapter four up, sorry for the wait!
Amazing!
I love your reporter.
Poor Brightmane though, she got
D'aww i.imgur.com/RYQLU.gif
Pinkie is being extraordinarily adorable here
211327 Hi Taran! I'm really happy you liked the reporter, keep an eye on him later in this story
211410 I'm really happy I could make an adorable Pinkie Pie. I'm not sure how in character she is, but I'm doing what I can. I'm really happy you liked the story Shefira! Also, did you do that drawing? If so I like it, it looks nice!
Yay! You made Pinkie her adorable, qwerky self, without writing her so she's annoying.
Woot!
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It's not my drawing, I got this stuff from gunnerkrigg.tumblr.com/
The Pinkie you got here was "in character" enough to me. The way she reacts to Canterlotians rejection, and her rapid-fire story-tellings, it's just feels right
214699 I agree with you. Pinkie was in character through out this chapter. Oh and SainityLost keep up the good work and smile
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