All my life I have been traveling. I've been all over Equestria and back. I've always been sort of a loner, by myself and I've never wanted to be with anyone , thats until I saw...her and from that point on I told myself would never leave her side. That I would stay by herside. The girl I fell in love with the moment I saw her. Twilight Sparkle.
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I like it so far, though I would suggest starting another paragraph everytime somepony starts talking, just to make it easier to read
I enjoyed it, very descriptive. Ill be anticipating the rest.
Hmmmm... this does look good (Twilight fan here)... just space out the paragraphs correctly and put dialogue separately and you'll be fine
Thanks for the tips but my computer is down for the time being so I can only edit at school on the week. Right now I'm just using my iPod until the computer issue is resolved.
I appreciate any tip for my improvement. I could use some advice in writing.
awesome story bro I fav it and followed you
keep that up
Omg he must know what he's doing
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