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1929400 Eep! Thanks for pointing that out. I went through this three times, but I probably missed some other things.
Mixed feels. They be everywhere.
...Sounds... kinky.
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Congratulations, you're the 30ith or so author that has actually convinced me to read your work. Good show ol' chap.
Edit: WAS kinky.
Also, fuck you for reminding me that I can't write by being a decent writer...
1929559 Wow really? Thanks.
1929620
I also got a boner.
Yeah, that happened....
1929718 Oh, sorry about that.
I for one enjoyed this fic. The writing was great and I really liked the whole prison set up. My favorite thing about this was the characters. You always seem to write interesting characters in your stories(except Dusty, that guy really rustled my jimmies in ways I can't explain).
1929778 hehe. What was wrong with Dusty?
I personally think this story's meh, but I'm not a good judge of clopfiction. I can't really say anything bad about it; it's just not my fancy, I suppose. I will try and get a much longer, more in-depth review of "The Time We Have," some time this week, since I like sad stories.
Also, PLEASE watch your capitalization.
I can't give it a thumb either way; it just didn't resonate with me.
1929933 I respect your opinion. Thanks for the honesty.
Dinner. That cream pie looks delicious!
Strangely heartwarming. I liked it.
Cannot is one word.
Capitalization was a touch off, but over all very nice.
1930519 Thank you, and yes, Capitalization is something I have the most trouble with sometimes. And cannot or can not can be used either way. I did this to create an effect, put great emphasis on the CAN NOT.
>Sorren always has excuses, ignore him
1930534
Huh, that's actually pretty clever. Although I would've put italics on "not", but that's me.
1930537
touche
Me gusta.
I found a few grammar/punctuation mistakes, but it was a pretty good clopfic. And now I know what a medial ring is.
Prison setting was pretty awesome, power struggle was entertaining and kinky. Good job!
1930938 Well thanks! And I remember the first time I had to google that. It was just a little awkward XD.
1932025
Lawl. Just a little, I imagine.
OC's.
It takes a good writer to get me interested in them, and I think you have just made it into that book of mine. I'd love to be a prereader for any future material of this nature. I caught a few errors that for me to put in the air right here would be nothing short of bitching about, but damn if this story wasn't worth the read. So few people here know how to invest into somewhat violent sex and impact play. I like Cedar's hooves on approach. And it didn't hurt that Cinnamon Stick was an inmate, but not a criminal. You gave me two ponies on both sides of the law and I happen to like the both of them. Nothing was excessive about it either. Most people would draw out the choking and add all sorts of wounds that kind of drive the reader out of the subspace developed when reading such material. Great job for the first of your work I've ever read.
1936451 Wow, it's nice to know that you really liked it. And yes, I wanted to make it a little rough, but not a contest of whoever could beat the hell out of one another before they got off. Also, I wanted to make Cinnamon likeable, and I had to do so by making him somewhat bad, but not like "bad" bad.
I think I'm done with clop for a while now, but if I ever get another one going, I would be glad to ask of your help.
Loved it sorren, you gotta write more clop man
So how long is Cinnamon in for anyways?
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I dare say yoking should continue this. I can definetly grasp at least 3 different plot lines of the top of my head for this story!
There must be more. THERE MUST. Even after a year.
4032367 Whoa, glad you found this. I'd almost forgotten about this fic.
4033742 And then she got pregnant.
The end.
5564377 Yes
5590863 Makes me wonder though, would she murder him, or force him to raise the child with her?
Hmmm...
Damnations, now you've got me curious.
awesome story.
This was good. Another chapter of a sequel would be grand.