“A Cutie Mark Crusader!” Applebloom picked up again. Her eyes were beaming as she looked up at me, and I tried desperately to shove away the part of my brain screaming at me to violate the picture of grateful innocence in front of me.
That bow would make such a good hand-hold."

really?

"“Scootaloo threw pencils at the ceiling until one fell off and stabbed her in the head, and then yelled until we went to get ice cream,” Applebloom answered, and got a glare in return."

You know, for all of the literary analysis I could do on your stories, laughing until my sides hurt because of a scene you've thought up is pretty good too.

Oh wow. I think this is as much a public service announcement and a warning as it is a fanfic. Warning for everybody: kids, parents, teachers...potential filly foalers...rich cunts at school...Spike....

I'm getting the feeling that this is not going to end well.
Oh well, at least it won't be the cliche lolicon-manga story ending. *Shrugs* Let's ride this train to the end of the track.

This is really well written and interesting. Each chapter leaves me wanting more.

.... This guy is awfully... Imaginative?

I am scared, someone hold me... And it better not be the guy in the story. I know he likes children, but you can never be too sure.

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Punching eminent

This guy's rape-O-meter just hit eleven.
Meh, interesting story and talented author I'm on to the next chapter huzzah!

I like foalcon, and I really like said foalcon when in relation to a human and any member of the CMC. So you know there is not really much I can say. However when this guy made him self the school monitor it made feel a little dirty.

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He lost himself a little to quick

This guy used to be a social worker?