When Rarity tells Fluttershy that Twilight Sparkle is moving back to Canterlot soon, Fluttershy is devastated. Not wanting Twilight to leave before she can tell her how she feels, Fluttershy tries to work up the courage to express herself to Twilight one last time.
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Aww... I enjoyed it. TwiShy is (almost) always something I'll love, unless it's done really poorly.
The only problem I had with this was the present tense, it felt a little weird for me to read. I still loved it though!
I need more of this story...Please?
Lovely story. Thank you.
Thankfully one of the better executed TwiShy stories on this site. I really enjoyed reading this even if it was a little short. Hope you make more like (or of) this in the future.
But I think you should put the rating up to Teen because of innuendos and implied sex between AJ and Rarity during Pinkies party.
Present tense gets a little annoying at times (I just personally don't like it in general, so it's not because you do it poorly), but the story is good
Really? I tend to like present tense because of its feelings of immediacy, that you're in the midst of the action instead of hearing about it after the fact. The zombie romance novel I'm reading right now, Warm Bodies (which I absolutely adore), uses it to great effect. Matt Stover uses it really well in Caine's Law, too. Thanks for the kind words, everybody! ^^ I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I didn't have any plans for a sequel or continuation of this story, but would the story benefit from one? If so, where would be fun to take it?
wait .. what a twist .. waht
Continuation would be good, that was adorable, I loved the way it ended, "I’m moving? When did that happen?"
I'm actually interested in how the others will react when Twilight comes back after the week and find out it was only a week long thing.
Wow im shocked! I love this story and have now already put it in my top 10 favs!
Two main reasons why: 1. the humor, the realism, and the shipping are awesome combinations, and well written I might add. 2. Its just sooooo sweet! I now have a fluttershy romance story that befits her perfectly
To>>>amazonessduo>>> simply awesome yay! so deserves a bro-hoof!
(This is only one chapter too)
Adorable and awesome. The present tense does feel a bit awkward to me, but some people, like my mom, do like that. It feels like a more comedic version of another story I read. It's such a cute ship, and any story that has it does it so well. Okay, there are a few that don't, but those are usually not good stories in the first place.
Hmm... Moving back? Rarity, you have a lot to explain!
This was really sweet! Fluttershy was adorable when she finally gathered the courage to confess her love, and the background Rarity/Applejack was cute, too. It's funny because Rarity/Fluttershy and Twilight/Applejack were the pairings I got attached to first, along with Rainbow Dash/Pinkie Pie. But certain episodes have some really sweet moments for Fluttershy and Twilight, especially "A Bird in the Hoof".
so freak saw that twilight was not move for good,
I had hope she was going to be gone for while because of some medical thing she was entering, and tell fluttershy she has some kind of illness she had for while and kept it secret from her friends......
RARITY! You caused poor Fluttershy to have a near panic attack over nothing!