No pony deserves this news, not from a regular check-up. Certainly not Miss Cheerilee. But when she's told she has a week to live... what will she do? How will she tell her family, her students?
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My god...
You have caught the plot device. You have less than a week to live. Celestia knows where this disease came from
but she's not telling anypony.
I noticed that they aren't 100% sure of this so that does leave a slight window of hope that Cheerilee doesn't have it but 98% is almost positively sure.
This is perhaps the first pony fic I've seen that makes use of the idea "What would you do if you only had a week left to live?"
I hope to see more soon. Although I don't think I'm going to like what happens at the end.
Its not fair
Easily one of the most emotional stories I've read, and this chapter's no exception. It just leaves that feeling you have in the gut before opening the floodgates. Tremendous job.
"I don't want to go." Cheerilee your David Tenant (10th Doctor) is showing.
And so it it with a heavy heart that Twilight assumes the role of substitute teacher for Ponyville Elementary. Here's hoping that somehow she can become the permanet replacement for Cheerilee.
Aw that so sad in a heartwarming way to know that even Berry Punch is having a hard time accepting the death of Cheerilee. Whne the time comes she's going to need all the help she can get.
Okay so we've got the end coming up fast. Another day or two and Cheerilee will be gone forever.
Please hurry up and post the next chapter ASAP. I can't stand this cliff hanger even though I'm not exactly looking forward to what happens to Cheerilee.
My only complaint is that there is no sign (that I can recall) that Cheerilee is dying. Sure, you've told us, but we don't really see it. Otherwise, this is a great piece of work. Keep it up!
The days keep going by... This gets more sad everythime
Well... suppose it was inevitable, huh?
I'd be repeating myself if I stated how appropriately written this is. I'm surprised it doesn't have waaaaaay more views.
So it's finally happened, well although we knew it was coming it doesn't make it any easier.
R.I.P. Cheerilee the greatest teacher Equestria ever knew.
Right in the feels.
I still think there should have been some signs or symptoms before-hoof.
Why didn't Mr. Waddle do the service?
Vash: troll.me/images/the-most-interesting-man-in-the-world/look-me-in-the-eye-and-cry-like-a-bitch.jpg
Me: i51.photobucket.com/albums/f400/lovemakesyoucrazy456/GIFS/crying-waterfall.gif
To sum up my thoughts in as few as words as possible would be. It's a great story.
I didn't full out cry like I thought I would, but you got me damn close, and for that I salute you. Damn emotions getting the best of me.
A very well written story. Not very many fanfics that I have read have brought me to fighting tears. This one did. I did love the last line though.
Very Lovely story, thank you very much!
I'm pretty sure many people would hate me for this (or not), but:
What if the doctors were stupid and it turns out that Cheerilee would have actually fallen into a deep sleep, but all known cases of the "condition" were recorded as deaths because they died in their sleep after being buried (alive)?
I don't write comments very often, but I just want you to know this made me cry a few tears. I want to thank you for writing this, and for providing allowing me catharsis.