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Piercing Spear, a royal soldier for Princess Celestia's new army, had been scheduled for deployment right on the front line of the Griffon war. He has just one week to go before he leaves, but there isn't anypony to help see him off, or anything to look forward to when he returns. He fillyfriend just broke up with him and his mother the last remaining member of his family, died by heart attack. Through drinking and magic he tries to drown out his sorrows, only to catch the eye of the bartender responsible for drunkening him up.

<Based on a true story, and mixed in with a story on another site. In loving memory of my recently deceased great-grandfather who was a veteran of both World War I and World War II. Remember to go hug a war veteran whenever you get the chance. They've earned it.>

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Awesome story, few spelling and grammar mistakes here and there, but nothing major.

Cheers.

-Wumz

That ending :(

I would also like to thank guns for making the assholes go away. JUST KIDDING.

2011296
You confuse me... I like that.


2011290
Yes, that ending.


2011102
Cheers? I don't cheer. It's not what I do.

The ending felt rushed a bit for me.

But...

So many feelz.

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