Chapter 5
'Oh my god how far are we going to walk. I feel like I've been walking forever!' Thought Colt.
Colt had been fallowing the pony, which if he remembered correctly was named Fluttershy, for a while now. Fluttershy had been leading Colt to somewhere out of the forest, but it seems she accidentally led him further into the forest. Looking around Colt had started to feel as if something was watching him. Fluttershy stopped walking. Having entered a small clearing She looked left and right before sighing in defeat. Turning around, she looked at Colt.
"I'm sorry little guy, but I think I got us lost in here." Fluttershy's head drooped and her ears fell flat against her head.
Colt mearly grunted. looking around he spotted a small cave off in the distance. It appeared to be on top of a hill. Looking up Colt noticed the Sun had begun to set, and the wind started to pick up. Feeling cold Colt started walking towards the cave. Stopping only to motion Fluttershy to follow him.
"Whats that? You want me to fallow you?" asked Fluttershy.
'No I'm just waving my hand around 'cuz It's hot out here.' Colt had to stop himself from rolling his eyes.
Resuming his walk up the hill. Colt began picking up fallen branches off of the forest floor. Fluttershy just eyed him funnily. When they made it to the top Colt had a small stack of soon to be firewood under his left arm. Walking to the mouth of the cave Colt Deposited the small stack onto the dirt floor. He then began looking around the mouth of the cave for some rocks to help contain the fire. While he was doing this, Fluttershy had sat down near the wood. She felt tired, after walking for most of the day. She decided to just sit there and watch her new friend do... whatever it was doing.
Colt had gathered enough rocks to make a small fire pit. He made his way closer in to the mouth of the cave. Not too far in where the smoke would have trouble getting out, but not too far out that the wind would be a major problem. setting the rocks down onto the ground, Colt turned around to motion Fluttershy to come over. Fluttershy, although reluctantly, got up from her somewhat comfortable seat and made her way to Colt. Sitting down, she stared at the rocks her friend had gathered.
"What lovely... Rock's you have here. There um. Pretty" She said with a somewhat forced smile.
Colt moved back to the pile of wood and brought it to the pile of rocks. He then began forming the rocks into a circle. Afterwards he put some of the wood inside the circle, along with some dry leaves he found, and began making a fire. Fluttershy watched Colt's intently. He was using his hands to rub two sticks together rather quickly. At first She didn't know what he was doing, or why he was doing it. That is, until a couple sparks were seen here and there. soon those sparks turned into a small little fire, Then The creature had put that small fire in the circle. Adding more wood and dead leave's, the small fire had turned into a roaring flame. Crackling now and then.
Fluttershy looked on in awe at this new creature's ability. 'It made a fire without magic...Wow' Fluttershy craned her head to Colt's direction. seeing him stare at the fire. Colt then started to look around. As if he was looking for something. Looking at a tree He started to walk towards it.
"H-hey where are you g-going?" asked Fluttershy.
The creature ignored her, and continued his trek to the tree. stopping in front of it. Fluttershy could hear a 'zip' noise, fallowed by the sound of liquid hitting ground. Face glowing slightly red, she averted her eyes from 'Him'.
"Well at least I know that your a Colt now" She mumbled.
After finishing up his business. Colt walked back to Fluttershy. Taking a seat near the fire. He stared at it. Not much was said for a while. There wasn't much to say anyways. With the hole I'm shy, your shy thing. That kind of made it difficult to speak. For both of them.
Clearing her throat, Fluttershy began to speak.
"So... That's a nice f-fire you made."
Colt stayed silent. watching the fire.
"Umm... s-sorry for getting us l-lost."
Colt grunted in affirmative. though still watching the fire. Fluttershy was thinking of way to cheer him up. He looked awefully sad. Maybe her getting them both lost had gotten him sad. She would have to think of a way to apologize. Maybe with something sweet. Fluttershy felt bad that she might have just lost her new friend, which she made that very same day. She decided she will make it up to him. Somehow. Her thought's were interrupted by the sound of growling coming from the creature's stomach.
Looking down, the creature slowly put a hand on his stomach. He then turned his head over to Fluttershy whom was staring at him sheepishly. "I did p-promise you a- apples earlier didn't I?" He nodded.
"S-sorry, but I don't have any one me. I thought I did, but I didn't."
Colt stared at her for a little while, before sighing and turning his attention back to the fire. Tomorrow, He will have to find a way back home. Or find a way out of this forest. though he did like the scenery, He missed his home.
Colt decided to lay down on the ground, and do a little star gazing. Not long after he lied down, Fluttershy moved closer to him, and also lied down to look at the stars. There was a comfortable silence through the air. Nothing but the Crackling of the fire, and the wind dancing though the trees. It was... nice. soothing to both of them.
Colt yawned loudly. Followed by Fluttershy who yawned much softer than him. As they both started to doze of Fluttershy Asked one question before falling into a deep comforting slumber.
"What should I call you?"
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I'd prefer Alicorn because it's canon, but Unicorn because less OP. Either way is good with me.
soo good yet so short
She is a alicorn now so for canon shake make her a alicorn.
you have a good story I just wish it was longer and alicorn/unicorn it just depends on what time this story takes place
alicorn and great update
It's a great concept, but it's lacking. I'm sorry to say that I'll be unfavoriting your story.
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Sorry to hear that, can you tell me what it;s lacking please.
2279056 Well for one, grammar, spelling, and capitalization. You need a pre-reader or you need to edit these mistakes yourself before you submit the story. Next is details. You have to sorry moving in a straight stone line. It's he does this, he does that. Very little detail.
Alicorn sounds good to me, be interesting to see what he thought of both wings and horn. Still, maybe make him a bit less shy please? Otherwise there is not really any dialog which explains anything.
Unicorn, also, did Colt will manage to speak to her in the next chapter? I will like to see her reaction when she find out she found a friend even shiner than her
I would say unicorn, but make alternate universe or before the coronation. We don't even know what will happen with the alicorn thing till s4, so I ilke keeping it safe.
If you can pull off alicorn without making it OP, do it. Otherwise unicorn is good. In other news, this story is excellent!
Keep it simple and have her be the unicorn we all know. We still won't know much about Twilicorn before S4, and how things have changed because of that.
Keep up the good work Private!
I would help out with editing, due to my free time, but I tend to get distracted. However, if you really need an editor, just send me a message or something, and I can help out.
This happens after the coronation, right? I'd say alicorn.