I like writing ponies. And violent explosions. For some reason, that's not a problem here.
Rainbow Dash has been caught. Discovered as a spy for the Cloudsdale resistance, the true owner of the Rainbow Factory has taken it upon herself to personally ensure that every single scrap of information they can find is forced out of the Element of Loyalty. But as the interrogation drags on, it becomes clear that not everything is as it seems. Is this really the Factory's greatest victory, or the beginning of the end?
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Just when you thought the rainbow factory fics were at their end...
I really enjoyed this.
SHIT! you should do more. its like the original rainbow factory story
1912403 Wow, haven't seen this video in a while. And in my defense, I wrote this thing a long time ago. It just took me a while to setup a fimfiction account.
1912931 Thank you!
1914008 Erm, what? And thanks!
1912931 Danke.
Hey you stole the Title of my story!
Please change it. Poeple are having trouble finding it. I have been here doing it since December 2.
1915684 he did not steal it.true he should change it but just a bit. but only to better help people in finding your story.
1915684 Whoops, my bad
1915684 My bad, it's changed.
1914008 Ah, Thank you!
THANKYOU
Sweet, sweet vengeance.
2530135 'Tis a beautiful thing.
3049224 Wow, that was creative. Using the c-word, really, how wonderfully racy. That's all sarcasm, btw, just in case your simple mind can't figure that out all on it's widdle lonesome. At least I don't need to hide behind the anonymity of the internet just to have the balls to insult someone. Also, you're gone.
1916898 WELCOMEZ.
Sorry it took so long to respond, btw. I'm usually WAY better at responding than...damn near a year, seriously!? Holy crap, super sorry!
3549199 Heh, almost forgot about this. Well its stuff like this that makes you realize how long its been I suppose.
Didn't feel as full as some of your other stories, but still not bad. It seemed to lack some of the build-up, but then I recalled that this is technically a retelling of an ending of someone else's story; which would explain the relative lack of build-up towards the door busting finale within this story.
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Yeah I wrote this in a rush one night over a year and a half ago, so there you go.
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Yeah I wrote this in a rush one night over a year and a half ago, so there you go.
My one nitpick with this story is that RD is cyan, not teal.
Otherwise, this was amazing.
8093893 Thanks, feels like forever since I wrote this, but compliments on even old work are welcome!
All I gotta say is everyone probably hates rainbows now, or at least gets a tad queasy when they see one.
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Yeah, no kidding...