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Kaipony


About 14 cupcakes short of a baker's dozen. Also occasionally goes by Stormy Seas.

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Raindrops believes her cutie mark predestined her to be a weathermare, but she was not content with that life. Then fate helped her accidentally drop a piano on the head of Celestia’s star pupil. With Raindrops depressed and adrift, her friend Seafoam convinces her to take a sightseeing cruise with a captain she knows. Raindrops heads out with Salty Breeze, but when the tour runs into a strange event the pair find themselves lost at sea. Worse, a massive storm is approaching quickly. Together, they must make it back safely and, along the way, perhaps discover what’s been missing in Raindrops’ life.

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Comments ( 13 )

First!!!! haha! :raritystarry::ajsmug:

“I’ll pass, but maybe later. So what’s this thing you drug me out of bed to see?” :pinkiegasp:

It is 'Dragged'. Small and I'm sorry but still. I think my short attention span made me find it difficult to read but I did it! :derpyderp2:

Not meaning any offence or anything, please don't take that the wrong way. :pinkiesad2:

By the way, last and not least, this story was great! Very interesting and could lightly visualize every detail. Great!!! Thank you.

:twilightsmile::rainbowwild:

Golly, I remember I came upon this story a looong time ago on EqD. I still haven't finished it! I started reading it on Google Docs, but yeah. never finished it. What I read of it was absolutely GORGEOUS though, so I can't wait to!:heart::raritywink:

:rainbowderp::rainbowderp::rainbowderp:
That was
Oh my god
SO GOOD.
HOW IN THE NAME OF CELESTIA DO YOU WRITE LIKE THAT?
I'm gonna do a critique on it in a few, so expect another comment. But, seriously, just a few grammatical things.
Don't change any of the content or anything.
To me, that stuff's all perfect:heart:

I really enjoyed this one. (though I usually think of Raindrops and Derpy as friends) :derpyderp1: You mentioned all of my favorite background ponies :pinkiegasp: Rose, Sea, Derpy, and of course Rain.
I noticed a couple typos, but other than that it was rather well written, good job! :twilightsmile:

This was the greatest thing...
ever...
of all time...

Hey! Didja notice? Raindrops got a character tag now so you can properly tag your story! :pinkiehappy:

raindrops has her own character tag now.

Oooooh, I really liked this one. What started as just a simple little tale about a relaxing vacation became a journey of self-discovery. Very well done, sir.

Very well-written, well-plotted, the kind of story that the fandom needs more of.

Nice. You get your 'yours' and 'you'res' fuddled at times, and Raindrops seemed a bit too clued-up for someone who didn't know where she was going in life, but by and large pretty nice. Reminds me of Long Distance by Ezn, a little. Nice job, in short!

Yep, knew I read this before. Still awesome. Huh, first time I reread something.

Me likes.

Raindrops paused at the foot of the brow

It's bow or prow, not brow.

Good story, and an excellent bit of world building. There aren't enough ponies at sea stories.

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