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After his unprincipled conduct at the gala, Prince Blueblood finds himself on a little compulsory adventure, in which really random things happen that eventually lead to his death.

All comments welcome! I want to improve my writing and I understand that criticism, however heartbreaking, is the only way to get better. Of course, compliments are appreciated too.

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Ok, this has got to be the new bible.

10/10, would fap to multiple times. This is the best story I ever read. Liked, Favorited, Tracked, and have a watch. Good day sir! Please have my babies and let us live in harmony for the rest of our lives, for you are truly the most amazing person ever.
Also, the Shrek reference, I see it.

This is the best fanfiction ever. Of all time.
:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

This is a satisfying story. :rainbowlaugh:

LOL SHREK

Meh.

Meh. Wasn't particularly special or even entertaining.

inb4 featured.

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Dude, Blueblood DIED. What's NOT TO LIKE?!

1902269

HE COULD HAVE SUFFERED!

1902270 You're right, this mars our victory, if only slightly.
AUTHOR, YOU NEED TO WRITE A SECOND CHAPTER ABOUT HIM BEING BOILED ALIVE, HIS SKIN MELTING OFF, HIS BODY BOILING, INSIDE THE DRAGON'S STOMACH!

And ugly pony that wears a cloak that lives in a cave in a deserted and remote forest, along with a dragon living in said cave? This sounds a lot like my story, Lol.

well it delivered what it promises

Epic. Simply epic. Have an upvote and a favorite :D

That title was pretty accurate. :derpytongue2:
Twas a satisfying end.
Liked and faved.

Hah! Okay, that was brilliant! :rainbowlaugh:

All this Blueblood bashing is ludicrous. If I were the relative of a god-king/queen forced to deal with the nobility, and probably various gold-diggers, I'd be a pretty cynical bastard too.

It's not like Rarity came off in a perfect light either.

Yes, I do see Blueblood as a cynical realist.

I liked the writing, and the plot wasn't all that bad. Good job!

Quick question, is the book the title is basd on worthe the read? I dont trust the reviews on most sights so figured id ask

*Claps* Brilliant, brilliant.

is it bad that i am happy that he died?:twilightblush::twilightblush::twilightblush: i never liked him:rainbowwild::rainbowwild::derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2:

1902270 1902273 CHALLENGE EXCEPTED

sorry i cant reply to other comments at this time, gtg, got things to see and people to do! but thank you! this is awesome! you guys are awesome!

"Prince Blueblood Dies at the End"

"Everyone"

:rainbowlaugh: I read this and I'm happy.

1918040 si, me hace muy orgulloso :twilightsheepish: :derpytongue2:

When I saw the title was a reference to "John Dies at the End" I couldn't not read this.

After reading it I can honestly say I loved it, a thumbs up and favorite from me. Bravo writer, bravo :pinkiehappy:

Funny, if you look up lists of peoples' least favorite MLP characters, Blueblood almost always ends up on them.:rainbowkiss:

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