Nicely done sir,

few things I missed that I just noticed reading it again:

Tapping it softly it -> remove first it in this sentence.

was some handle -> was some kind of handle OR was a handle

weapons quickly swept in her direction She quickly -> remove first or second quickly in this sentence.

declared it want -> declared it wants

Keep up the good work - Really looking forward to the next chapter.

not to sound like a fanboy but.... okay, i'm a fanboy. CE was my favorite of the series and i am fucking LOVING this.

should've called it Equus, but the looks on some faces are priceless when she said she was from Earth

This chapter was brilliant and it seems as though you've got everyone characterized perfectly so far. I'm glad that you're also doing a different take on it, nice to see it where one of the mane 6 is the stranger to the rest of the cast.

I thought of calling thr ponies world Earth too, but decided against it. By the way, is pvt Jetson's first name George?

This is shaping up pretty good. I like how she was transported to the Autumn before the fire-fights began. I was expecting her to meet the Chief (or a marine) by having him save her from the Covenant

Well, I've read both chapters several times, and I have to say I like this story! It feels perfect, considering I got "Halo: Combat Evolved Anniversary" for Christmas this year.

When you said she wasn't on Halo yet, I figured Twilight was going to end up on either the Pillar of Autumn or the Truth and Reconciliation, but I'm kind of glad you went with the former. Seems like it makes a little more sense, and everything that followed her discovery was handled nicely.

Anyway, I'm enjoying this story so far, and I can't wait to see more from you!

...When's the next? o3o

please continue the story

I wonder if she'll end staying with chief and cortana on halo; it's both the safest and most dangerous place to be

Oooookaaay... well this is awkward, so how should I put it.
Hmmmm... oh right!
Are you INSANE?!
Don't take this the wrong way, I loved CE and what it had to offer, but when I played it as a kid I was scared shitless (anyone who played it knows why, and when, AND by what).
My point being: you put an innocent unicorn in the HALO universe at the very BEGINNING of the franchise, which will probably leave SERIOUS mental scarring, and not just her, but human AND covenant as well.
I really hope you know what you're doing...
Putting that aside, it's all good. So...

who would have thought, two planets with the same name and both of them having forrunner technology, also if you ever get around to it i have a suggestion, one i make to all fics like this with twilight sparkle, want it need it grenade

when will the next chapter come out?

Dude. You should have one of the labbies or patrols be a brony, or U GONNA HAVE SOME 'SPLAININ TO DO!

2206387 pfftHAHA, yur coating it

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Radar has picked up helicopter going soi soi soi.
At least you don't have to deal with them on a day to day basis.
*gives look* We heard that
*without turning around*I know and don't give me that look.
*growling noise*
I'll find something for you to do.
*growling noise
Go water the plants.
*growling noise*
No you may not start a forest fire as helpful as that may be.
*growling noise*
Don't you take that tone with me!
*growls and leaves*
*under breathe* Pyromaniacs.
*growling noise*
HEY! Put those down and find some non decorative boulders to break or clear a path for some road workers.
*growling noise*
Yes I know there's no snow. WE'RE IN A DESERT VALLEY and it's the wrong season!
*growling noise
Find some condemned buildings will ya.