Hello, this is the FimFiction account for the Brony Fore. We're a group of bronies who make vids (soon) and stuff. This account is manned by me, Waffle_Wave.
Four years after Doug arrives in Equestria and the mares of Herd Apple are still going strong. Well, relatively speaking; Rainbow is on the road to recovery while Applejack and Pinkie Pie add new members.
The mares of Herd Apple celebrate the birth of Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle, and Scootaloo and adjust to their life as dams in a town that isn't happy with their choice of stallion - the lone human in Equestria.
If this. as ment to be comedic then PFFEHEHEHEHEE.
If more seductive then, heh heh well that was fast.
If this first chapter was about 2ce the length with more detail to everything and, in my preference of reading. Try not to say rainbow or shy anymore then 5 times per paragraph heh.
Dont get me wrong, if this is how ya roll, then keep rollin. Im interested to see where this leads. And how your take it there.
1973820 I have read this, and am at this moment editing and adding to this chapter. Getting rid of most of the rainbows and shys, and replacing them with the more general shes and hers. My only concern is that readers may get confused as to who's doing what. Thanks for your congrats! Would you like to be my editor? I don't know how that works or anything, but if you do, then I'll immediately send all new chapters.
Okay, so edited/added to version will take longer because some people close the while of google chrome when they're done doing what they're doing.so that happened to me, and now I've gotta redo it today
Chapters will be posted within three days of each other, unless there is an edit (Which there probably will be for the first ten chapters or so) In which case, the new chapter will be posted within three days of the edit. New chapter has foalcon, foursome rape, and rimming, ENJOY!
No, she just wasn't lesbian.they had heard all the rumors that she was and assumed that that was the best way to get back at her.plus they fucked a filly,i mean it's not like they weren't Virgins.
NEW TITLES! I have planned out new and better titles for every chapter in the series. Also, in case you were wondering, it's a 12 chapter series, along with maybe more Erased Memories. Give me suggestions for those because look what happened with the first one! I may like me some foals, but I didn't even like that one a lot. Suggestions are suggested
I am finding these stories very enjoyable, though a few more of those akward encounters would be enjoyed. I mean...what would Gilda do if she found Dash with a dong that is not a strap on? I would also recommend you try and make a little more of a dialog between characters before moving to clop, or maybe the dialog gets so hot and steamy that the two do not even have to touch each other...I have seen it happen
ok that was a first muzzle fucking....wow...it was sounding like a bad porno but in a funny way not a bad way, I have a feeling that Twilight is gonna be a total freak, do not disappoint
2025716 Well so far, each time dashie has had sex it has been taken up a step, I mean she just filled AJ with spooge to the point of inflation. I think Twilight might be a bit of a super freak
2030295 Oh noes, you've seen into the future! About one chapter in the future exactly. 2025848 To be honest, the only reason it's been taken up a notch each time is because of two things: 1.) Dashie is loving this so much. and 2.) I don't want these scenes to all be the same generic clop scene, or to repeat to the point of suckiness. Repeating slightly is fine in my book, but I'm not sure if even that much is okay. So I've repeated only at the smallest things, such as the feelings.
Chapters will either be as short as chapter 1, or be even longer. Probably will depend on my mood/time. ENJOY!
reading.......
If this. as ment to be comedic then PFFEHEHEHEHEE.
If more seductive then, heh heh well that was fast.
If this first chapter was about 2ce the length with more detail to everything and, in my preference of reading. Try not to say rainbow or shy anymore then 5 times per paragraph heh.
Dont get me wrong, if this is how ya roll, then keep rollin. Im interested to see where this leads. And how your take it there.
Congrats on the first boner starter!
those clouds... they look like large intestines
AWESOME! Keep going!
I love it
1973820 I have read this, and am at this moment editing and adding to this chapter. Getting rid of most of the rainbows and shys, and replacing them with the more general shes and hers. My only concern is that readers may get confused as to who's doing what. Thanks for your congrats! Would you like to be my editor? I don't know how that works or anything, but if you do, then I'll immediately send all new chapters.
Okay, so edited/added to version will take longer because some people close the while of google chrome when they're done doing what they're doing.so that happened to me, and now I've gotta redo it today
EDIT IS DONE!
Now for chapter two!
1975601 Yeah, well your unfair judgement was telling me you disliked it, and then liking and favouriting it.
Chapters will be posted within three days of each other, unless there is an edit (Which there probably will be for the first ten chapters or so) In which case, the new chapter will be posted within three days of the edit. New chapter has foalcon, foursome rape, and rimming, ENJOY!
Also, somehow the second chapter, a pure basically one-shot clopfic within a clopfic. Except there will be more. Not necessarily with the same ponies.
So Rainbow enjoyed being fucked by colts
So Dumb-bel, score? And hoops turned her straight without knowing?
No, she just wasn't lesbian.they had heard all the rumors that she was and assumed that that was the best way to get back at her.plus they fucked a filly,i mean it's not like they weren't Virgins.
Connor, every clop is your kind of clop.
I love it
NEW TITLES! I have planned out new and better titles for every chapter in the series. Also, in case you were wondering, it's a 12 chapter series, along with maybe more Erased Memories. Give me suggestions for those because look what happened with the first one! I may like me some foals, but I didn't even like that one a lot. Suggestions are suggested
1991128 What's with the score? Also, I replied to you on my phone so I couldn't technically reply.
I am finding these stories very enjoyable, though a few more of those akward encounters would be enjoyed. I mean...what would Gilda do if she found Dash with a dong that is not a strap on? I would also recommend you try and make a little more of a dialog between characters before moving to clop, or maybe the dialog gets so hot and steamy that the two do not even have to touch each other...I have seen it happen
I love it
2011652 figured out how to reply on phone, advice greatly appreciated, have a preview!
DELAY ON THIRD CHAPTER! JUST WROTE A LOT OF IT, AND ACCIDENTALLY HIT A BUTTON MAKING IT GO BACK HERE! GODDAMN! I LOVED THAT SCENE LIKE A CHILD!
ok that was a first muzzle fucking....wow...it was sounding like a bad porno but in a funny way not a bad way, I have a feeling that Twilight is gonna be a total freak, do not disappoint
Wow I love it
2022490 i would like to thank you for being so supportive, slate! In fact,i shall follow you.
2022444 so i don't disappoint, what do you mean?
2025716
Well so far, each time dashie has had sex it has been taken up a step, I mean she just filled AJ with spooge to the point of inflation. I think Twilight might be a bit of a super freak
What would Scootaloo think of her idol now that Dash has a dick?
2030295 Oh noes, you've seen into the future! About one chapter in the future exactly.
2025848 To be honest, the only reason it's been taken up a notch each time is because of two things: 1.) Dashie is loving this so much.
and 2.) I don't want these scenes to all be the same generic clop scene, or to repeat to the point of suckiness. Repeating slightly is fine in my book, but I'm not sure if even that much is okay. So I've repeated only at the smallest things, such as the feelings.
2031187
I can fully understand that
2031187 lol I figured you were headed that way and truth be told I was hoping for it
Author note: if anything seems trollish our retarded in some way, please report it to me.is probably one of my dumb ass friends