Chapters will either be as short as chapter 1, or be even longer. Probably will depend on my mood/time. ENJOY!

reading.......

If this. as ment to be comedic then PFFEHEHEHEHEE.

If more seductive then, heh heh well that was fast.

If this first chapter was about 2ce the length with more detail to everything and, in my preference of reading. Try not to say rainbow or shy anymore then 5 times per paragraph heh.

Dont get me wrong, if this is how ya roll, then keep rollin. Im interested to see where this leads. And how your take it there.

Congrats on the first boner starter!

those clouds... they look like large intestines

AWESOME! Keep going!

I love it

1973820 I have read this, and am at this moment editing and adding to this chapter. Getting rid of most of the rainbows and shys, and replacing them with the more general shes and hers. My only concern is that readers may get confused as to who's doing what. Thanks for your congrats! Would you like to be my editor? I don't know how that works or anything, but if you do, then I'll immediately send all new chapters.

Okay, so edited/added to version will take longer because some people close the while of google chrome when they're done doing what they're doing.so that happened to me, and now I've gotta redo it today

EDIT IS DONE!

Now for chapter two!

1975601 Yeah, well your unfair judgement was telling me you disliked it, and then liking and favouriting it.