• Member Since 29th May, 2012
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PieDisliker


Bout time I updated my Bio. I'm PieDisliker, I have ideas pop up in my head all the time but only my favorites make it out there in words. Hope you enjoy what I can create.

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Try your best to be a good pony. If you do so happen to make a mistake and fail, well... consequences will occur. But please, for of all the things loved by Celestia, don't make Fluttershy mad.

This is what went on in a pony's head right after committing such an offense.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 9 )

Very nice one shot!:pinkiehappy:Lemme just up vote...

If Fluttershy gave me the stare I would:

1. Attempt to close my eyes or look away. Likely would fail.

2. Keel over and apologize profusely. Wouldn't even matter if I was right.

1898932 Thinking of everything that is in Ponyville,the best thing to do when you are a jerk is RUN!
Seriously,we got a family nearly as big as Texas,the student of GOD,the one who you never want to make angry,someone who will catch you if they notice your behaviour,the stare master HERSELF,and someone with connections to everyone who has money & a Problem of the week to trouble you soon.
Everyone who is dumb enough to plan to face the stare is too dumb to live as a bad guy. :trixieshiftright:
Oh,and BTW,nice story,PieDisliker!

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You wouldn't even need to be a jerk. The residents, including the Mane6, are so messed up, you could accidentally offend one of them and the other five would be after you.

I (finally) read this! I just wish I knew who the pony was and what they did. I am picturing an orange filly running off into the Everfree.

Really good story! I wish there was more explanations, but I understand that that was the point of the story. It has something extra going for it, what with the character whose POV we're seeing this from isn't even identified, allowing the reader to put what they want in.

With the familiar way of speaking, I was under the impression it was one of the main 6 characters, but since it was never said, I obviously don't know.

5612088 Thanks for the feedback! Obviously the character being unidentified was intentional and I felt it added a lot of value. I tried to make it less of a story and more of an experience, but it was pretty fun to write out. Feel free to make any interpretations you want to. =)

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