One might be able to get around your own house blind, and maybe even around your own town when you're blind, but wander too far and you soon lose sight of where you need to be. When a blind photographer, by the name of Hi-Rez, finds himself on unfamiliar turf, will he be able to find his way home again?
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This is going to be a remastered version of The Long Way Home. It's going to be FAR better than my original work.
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While I'm all for characters with disabilities overcoming adversity and all that I just feel like a blind photographer is too much for me to accept. I could believe that he is adept at developing photos and knowing cameras inside and out (Assuming this world doesn't have digital technology yet) but when it comes to being a photographer his entire skillset becomes pushing a button. He can't colour coordinate, frame the shots properly or adjust the lighting, he can't tell if he got a good shot, and he can't do any editing work on it. Even if he somehow manages it, he's destined to fail because no one is going to hire a blind photographer for anything. Why is the main character perusing one of the most mind numbingly difficult careers he could possibly have with his condition?
Also this sentence came across far more sexually than I think you intended.
She was a new feeling to me, one I’d never felt before. I felt comfortable around her, as though she were a fortress of solid iron that could not be penetrated. She made me feel nice, and I hoped I was returning the favor.
That makes her sound like a strange sentient sex robot. At the very least take out the word "penetrated"
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Never intended for that to sound dirty, so I'm gonna edit that.
Also, the story's remaining the way it is. It becomes understandable later.