I was a normal 16 year old, well kind of normal depending on you definition of "Normal". After being stalked by a light pony, i was transported to Equstria, guess what!... no memories... sucks to suck right?
Also, if you're one of those lovely haters, i love hate mail so send it my way if you so choose ;) until then Bro-Pony out.
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Yeah! You go! Delete all those Haters! XD
I want more.
Is it possible to make some paragraphs.
It's pretty tiresome to read so much text at once.
but the story isn't that bad.
Is downright died or spirit still exists
i hope he continues it
Sooo…Did Shadow will stay death? I will honest with you, I don't exactly like the concepts of clones, if Mist could erase memories what stop Darkblood to do the same? I hope that shadow return in some way, like the clones slowly get marts of shadow and finally merge and bring Shadow back…or Shadow return from the other side, this time prepare…or his armor, bring him back from death and he will defeat his 2 evil counterparts…or something like that…is just…very unfair the end result for him…
I was hopping more this romance with the girls will occur, Dash still own him to dinners and Pinkie own him two favors too, bottom line, I don't like the idea of clones, but is your story in the end…just suggestion that don't keep them for long, and bring the protagonist.
Thanks for the chapter.
P.S: Did we will see the girls in human form again? Or one or both princess in human form in the future?
whens more?
"LOL DAT'L SHOW TEH H8RS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111!!11!!!1!!!1!1!!!11!!!!one!!!!!!1!!!!!!1!!!!!eleven!!!!!1!1!!!1!!!!!!2"
Seriously, learn to take some criticism. Deleting comments shows that you can't take any criticism at all and just get rid of them so you won't have to see them. I haven't seen the original ones, but I at least know people like sierra_seven_ wouldn't blindly yell at you. You think that all negative criticism is hate, it appears. Well, it's not. When writing prose, you will get people telling you what's right and what's wrong with your writing. Well, it appears that you got rid of all of the criticism on the negative side. I see your story is extremely flawed, at that is so. You will get negative criticism from this, and you have to read it and take it into consideration, not delete it.
I'm not even going to review this myself; you make me sick, and you don't even deserve to learn how to get better at right.
Phew, is good news that Shadow is still alive, I hope he return in the future, and the clones disappear soon before they hurt anypony, sorry but I still don't like the idea of the clones. Maybe if they just take his place as the guardians and they become the spirits, then everything will be fine, but yeah, the clones thing…is a little annoy, and the fact that they have this existential issues don't help.
Yeah I know is cruel, and yeah they are trying to become their own colts, but still, I don't exactly like their creations. Well at least will take me alot to get use to it.
good story.
I still think is better for the clones to go and Shadow returning, well at least Shadow could return to life. And the air can be clear. Depth down I think Shy is with Sole because he remind her of Shadow
Evergreen...?
Like he/she said you should take some time to edit your story to make paragraphs. Good story so far will continue to read now.
an evergreen is a pine tree.
Discontinued...?