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DVAN56


I'm just a writer from a crazy place called Ohio

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The Everfree forest needs a package delivered and only a human can do it in these dark times. The man must fight his way through the lands of Equestria to Cantorlot if he is ever to see his home again.
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First attempt at doing a Fanfic.
Not a Fallout NV crossover.
Cover Art by Me.
feedback would be appreciated.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 15 )

Well the idea is interesting but right now i don't have enough time to read. Tomorrow i will read and comment.

hmm, I will read. :moustache:

good so far :ajsmug: keep it up

Comment posted by DVAN56 deleted Jan 17th, 2013

this is epic! :fluttercry: loved it :pinkiesmile::pinkiehappy:

1979223 Gaaaa i knew i forgot something:twilightoops:
But in all seriousness i wanted the guy to be nameless. So no name.

I'm confused... the sisters of the moon and the sun decide to fuck his life up because the Entity of the Everfree saves Equestria, and then they say "OMGSH WE WANT TO THANK YOU AND SHIT" ...:rainbowhuh:
but (in my opinion) other than that and some grammar issues this is a great story!

I LIKE IT
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I am really hoping this is a New Vegas crossover.

Everfree Courier by DVAN56
Score: 3 out of 10
- Weak Story Arc
- Bland and Unstable Characters
- Poor Dialogue
- Bad Mood Setting
Read the full review here.

El lagarto del Goblin Slayer.

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