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Well ti was funny but lets see here. Quotes...need commas errr They don't have coke or Dr.Pepper in Equestria i think and over use of omgs but other than that incredibly funny.

Comment posted by DarkPhoniex239 deleted Jan 3rd, 2013

Plasmadon edited version rewritten by this user helping me out alot so i thank em

Short description, what is your deal?

1894751 i am gonna be adding more soon so hold ur ponies:derpytongue2:

Where the hell did you get that cover image.
I want to know.

This story was quite funny!
Well done.

Well, I don't really want "Twilight strip club" on my search history.

1894987 The artist is one 'Junglepony'. A simple Google search should bring up the dA account.

Thank you sir.
I take my leave.

This was an interesting story in any case.

I dont even....Ok this explains all of it :facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof:

1889961 Ah, but how do you know, they don't have it? There's obvious evidence of fizzy/foaming drinks, and there isn't anyevidence to prove it doesn't.

1895162 ..................................................................................Its....perhaps Cider?

1895219 Dr. Cider... interesting. You have just given me an idea for a one-shot. Thank you, sir!

1895248 That is just........Perfect...

1895344 i am picking dear amd i am happy i got my story offically published

Before I read, as I am about to, they are all naked anyways, how does a pony strip club even work?


It is good so far. also, my exact response to how fast you replied was "HolyshitIdidnotexpectaresponsethatfast!" all in one word in my head!

"Well, that escalated quickly..."

I anticipate more.

1895661 yea next chapter is gonna be hell for twilight

She then walked through the door, and things went wrong in so many ways., i love it when things go wrong. makes the story interesting.

Erm i just realized you told me Twilight was going to have a heart attack realization when she finds out its a strip club. I didn't see that in the story. But it's epic anyway. :twilightsmile:

1897609 oh trust me she will get her heart attack lol :derpytongue2:

Good luck with your Story, SilverPony. I'll do the same to mine as well.

Twilight x Rarity? Now theres one I haven't heard before. Interesting story, but I don't think i'mm going to continue it. Sorry. :twilightsmile::raritywink::derpyderp1:

This story. OH, THIS STORY.

Made me lol :rainbowlaugh:

i like how applebloom was oblivious

Comment posted by DrAku deleted Jan 5th, 2013

This was an interesting story, but you might want to slow down a little bit, give the characters some more reactions or develop the timing of the story a bit further - Everypont just seemed to dive into everything without thinking.

Still, I'll keep an eye on this for a few chapters.

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