twilight goes to a canterlot strip club and freaks
pretty good can't wait until next chapter... oh wait i can
2114450 the next chapter gonna take longer to do with my new series coming about soon so i am trying to do alot
Whoa! It's a perfect 9,999 words!
2160096 yep yep yep
2189102Now you just need to UPDATE it.
2191088 i will be updating soon i promise
its a good story. I just wish you'd slow down and let the intensity grow. A lot is happening and it seems rushed ..
the fic is pretty good so far only problem is you use the word sense when you should be using since
2404281 ok thanks
I got a bad feeling that Spike will be heartbroken.
pretty good can't wait until next chapter... oh wait i can
2114450 the next chapter gonna take longer to do with my new series coming about soon so i am trying to do alot
Whoa! It's a perfect 9,999 words!
2160096 yep yep yep
2189102
Now you just need to UPDATE it.
2191088 i will be updating soon i promise
its a good story. I just wish you'd slow down and let the intensity grow. A lot is happening and it seems rushed ..
the fic is pretty good so far only problem is you use the word sense when you should be using since
2404281 ok thanks
I got a bad feeling that Spike will be heartbroken.