A long-awaited (not really) Sequel to Twilight's Curiosity: War II
I did work on another story for a bit, but oh well, here goes this one.
What Twilight saw tormented her constantly. She was always remembering what it was like on Earth. She also was getting constant flashbacks, like a Vietnam veteran. She knew that she had to do something, or else she would never be happy again. Her curiosity (more of it) was nagging at her. She didn't like it. But she knew that she had to go back! Look out Humans, here come the Magical Sparkling Purple Unicorn of Friendship!
Chapters (9)
Nice
Keep the good work my friend
and
have you think about to put a Theme song
also (this might be silly
FirsPost
Yea... long awaited... more like two days...
This is kind of wall-of-texty, ya know.
My rating of the series so far...
Five Flutterrages
(9.8/10)
Interesting... I shall be awating MOAR!
Whew, an interesting start!
Also, nice cameo of Doughnut Joe there.
So, this is basically Command and Conquer Generals, but Russia instead of China?
Poor Twilight...
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No, I hadn't really thought of that...but I guess that it is!
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Oh, she'll be fine
I love the way you ended that last paragraph there is just something about it that I like.
Also Twilight would be the obvious choice if you wanted a pone to be a caffiene addict. She works all night and day so she must drink alot of coffee.
Cant wait for the next chapter I love this story so much!
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Thanks. You know, I had my doubts about my writing skills, but it's people like you who help me go forward, thanks!
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No probs mister LordEpicNerd! /)?
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can someone please tell me what the tf2 refrence is
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Just use Google translate to translate the Russian and, if you've played it enough, you'll know what it is
Speaking of WW2 I would like to see the dogs in this fic
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Dogs? Hey, not a bad idea...I think that would be pretty good, considering Twilight knows and loves dogs, whereas she never knew about humans...I wonder how many qualms killing dogs would give her....we'll just have to see...
1919928 i was thinking about finding landmines and delivering messages
Oh Celestia.
If only you knew that Twilight was enlisted in the "genocidal humans" military.
NOOO A CLIFF HANGER!
I feel defeated, the kind of defeat you feel when you loose on a oc.tc Minecraft PvP server
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I hate that kind of defeat.
Hey, don't worry, I'm actually writing the next chapter right now, which means today is....three chapters total!
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I actually might write to the end of this story tonight, which would mean that today, I cranked out four instead of just one...
Story: It all happened when a bright, golden light began to glow in the center of the rubbled building. It was accompanied with a high-pitched whirring sound. Then Celestia and Luna stood, at the center of all of the rubble.
Me: O_____________________________________O
Wait Threequal? Is this a sequal! It started certainly like the first story in a series.
But really I want this to continue, I was hoping for the story to continue. Celestia and Luna would of tried to make Twilight come home but then Twilight could have refused, and Twilight's friends (being the soldiers) could help defend her. Then Xenolestia could have been introduced and Celestia could have tried to hurt or even kill the Soldiers (Russian, Taliban, and American) trying to get Twilight back!
Ooops I probably just eliminated one of your ideas for a sequal huh?
EDIT: I went back to chapter one and found out that this WAS a sequal! Dont worry I read the first book its just that I was confusing the two to be part of one story, that and my brain decided it would be funny if it didnt proccess the fact that the story has a giant 2 in its name. :/
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Um, yeah, hence the "II" at the end
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Actually, you didn't because I have absolutely no idea what I'd do.
I'm going to start working on a Story about a human who does to Equestria (original, huh?) but, due to his human nature, the ponies dub him insane and actually put him in an asylum. Does that sound interesting?
You make the Soviet Union look like pussies instead of really fighters!!!
Go back to the games and leap trough a book and learn how they fight!!!
you make me feel like vomit...
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Wha...?
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This Russian freaking tore three Talibs to death with his bare hands...no pussieness there.
MAKE A THREEQUEL!!!!
because
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Aah, I'm glad that Twilight gets back safely and sound.
And it's indeed best for her not to have any memory of the incident.
when you described the black clads in the 1st story
i DID think of the helghasts
but then i was like "theres no way he means that"
vampires are going crazy
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yep. I've actually never played Killzone, I've just seen covers, but that's what was exactly in my mind
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umm...okay?
"It was revolting, absolutely revolting, and Twilight spat the contents out immediately. But....she found herself taking more and more sips from the can as the General's speech went on...for some reason...it was good now."
logic
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That was my reaction the first time I tried it.
celestia you just pissed me off right there, and here i thought she wanted twilight to make some friends
thanks for atleast giving me a fool's hope that twilight may remember
cuz if she forgot, then all of this has been for naught
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I said that there may or may not be a threequel...but not for a while. You should check out my other couple stories I have out.
... And now I forgot favorite FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK!
Wat.
im royaly pissed off at celestia right about now
Judging by "The Training" and "The first battle" - again сliched Russians... Again... Just fucking again. Plus, if you don't want to look like an idiot for the ones who can understand Russian language (me, for example), please, don't use google translator for a complicated language like that. Really, the phrases on Russian you wrote... Well, they are just senseless.
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You haven't seen a wall of text in these parts, have you? ;D There was one story I really wanted to read, but... the first chapter had about a thousand words... in two paragraphs.
I tried. I failed.
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That moment when you get a reply on an over six year old comment. I don't remember ANY of this!