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RandomPerson78642

RandomPerson78642 #1 · Jan 2nd, 2013 · · · Aftershow ·

Ohohoh yes. This place needs more SoarFire.

Enceledus

Enceledus #2 · Jan 2nd, 2013 · 2 · · Aftershow ·

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Fimbulvinter

Fimbulvinter #3 · Jan 2nd, 2013 · · · Aftershow ·

That was well written and very erotic
I don't usually go for anthro stories, but this one caught my eye.
thumbs up.

Seraph973

Seraph973 #4 · Jan 2nd, 2013 · · · Aftershow ·

If this is an anthro story than why the human tag? There are no humans in the story. Anthropomorphic ponies is not that same as humanized ponies.

trio

trio #5 · Jan 2nd, 2013 · · · Aftershow ·

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Hmm, good point.

POOF it's gone.

Seraph973

Seraph973 #6 · Jan 2nd, 2013 · 2 · · Aftershow ·

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By the way, there is a group for anthro stories, called Anthropomorphics. Check it out.

Chaotic Mind

Chaotic Mind #7 · Jan 3rd, 2013 · · · Aftershow ·

Good one. Also:
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trio

trio #8 · Jan 9th, 2013 · 1 · · Aftershow ·

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I'm probably not the best person to get writing advice from. I'm a mess in the process even if the result turns out good.

Also yeah I like endings that punch you in the face with feels.

RandomPerson78642

RandomPerson78642 #9 · Jan 20th, 2013 · 1 · · Aftershow ·

So... no chapter 2? I has a sad now.

Oh well. Like we say in russia, не судьба.

trio

trio #10 · Jan 20th, 2013 · · · Aftershow ·

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Nah, not right now. Looking back on what I had planned it was dumb anyway. Plus other things. I'm gonna let this stand on its own for now.

Tatsurou

Tatsurou #11 · Jun 2nd, 2014 · · · Aftershow ·

Very nice, hot story. The feelings really came through.

Warlord1911D1

Warlord1911D1 #12 · Feb 21st, 2016 · · · Aftershow ·

She gazed back, her expression begging for him to just do it.

I immediately thought of this:
JUST DO IT!!!

Warlord1911D1

Warlord1911D1 #13 · Feb 21st, 2016 · · · Aftershow ·

1895744 You know what I thought of as soon as the pic loaded? I thought of this http://ci.memecdn.com/150/1223150.gif

lambda

lambda #14 · Jun 11th, 2018 · 1 · · Aftershow ·

That last line makes a world of difference. It could be a clopfic, and an average one at that but that last line turns it into a memorable slice-of-life story that's semi-cloppale.

~~And I'll be sipping my tea waiting for the unlikely-if-ever-to-happen-sequel~~

vinviasshine