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ianv64


My name is Ian. I have recently gotten into MLP... I've read a few fanfics, so i thought it would be cool to write my own... I am a huge photoshop/design freak, and love art, and music...

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Living with Asperger's syndrome isn't easy. For developing friendly, or personal relationships, this can be a huge hindrance. As a stallion named Slicer Blue meets Nurse Redheart, and tries to talk to her, he is unsure of communication strategies. He comes off the wrong way.

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I feel for you, Slicer Blue. I have aspergers too and the way we are treated is the same. Im happy that I'm not alone...:pinkiesad2:

Another good saddie. :scootangel:
Can sad stories be good? Hmm. :applejackunsure:

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-May be socially awkward, or have trouble with friends and relationships with others.
-Usually very smart, or intrigued with logic, and learning.
-Doesn't make eye contact usually.

:rainbowhuh:That basically describes m-...

Oh Crap.

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Isn't revelation great? :twilightoops:

i have aspergers too, pain in the ass and every one at school pisses me off, but it helps tone done the rage i have inside that is building.:twilightsmile:

nice story, I have aspergers myself, but ive not been quite that hindered socially, unfortunatly it seems all my advanced aspurger powers have gone towards memorizing fandom and entertainment, rather then world domination as i would have preffured. :pinkiecrazy:

anyways, great story, thanks for posting it up. :pinkiehappy:

A new Nurse Redheart fic! I'll have to add this to my read later. :twilightsmile:

Almost everything in this story, like not having any (true) friends, being socially anxious, not willing to talk, being the only REAL smart one in my school, and just after reading this, I realized depression flowed throughout me. :fluttercry: I'd wonder if ANYTHING like this would happen to me. Being an aspergers person isn't as easy as it seems.

A few things here:

"Ms. Flower patch...?" He raised his hand and spoke at the same time.

Should be hoof, since they're ponies

2. Be sure the person is okay with you talking to them. The may not be in the mood.

They

The only thing is, I did .Around 7th grade, when I turned 13,

The period needs to be moved back a space

I was just getting o like my mom.

to

or what you name is,

your

But for right now, I'ts calm.

should be it's

I don;t talk to anyone.

don't

But today ,I worked with Pinkie.

The comma should be moved back a space

I wouldn't say she stopped beign my friend,

being

The Lonliness just got too much to bear.

Needs to be spelled loneliness, but the L can stay capitalized for emphasis

"I might be going crazy, but you name is Redheart, right?" I asked

your

Grammar aside, this was a good story.

I hated group projects in school. The teachers always told you to do "Peer review." Where you were "scored" on communication, and team work, participating and what not. I always got an B or A for on task, but everything else was bad.

Don't worry, Slicer. You're not alone:
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Maybe we got off on the wrong foot before

foot

6535592 They are still called feet, y'know.

This was so good!!

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