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monsterlord18


heartbreakingly single...

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being the First Alicorn born outside of royalty is hard. being born with a Cutie Mark is harder still. having dominion over Time makes it difficult. but Starlight is trying hard to make the best of it. trying to, being the key word. then one day, 17 years later, she discovers something that shocks her to her core; that her father may not be her real father, and her mother is keeping who it is tight-lipped. so, she's gonna take it into her own hands.

she's going to go find her real father. if her friends want to join along, she's not going to stop them. she's still going to find him or die trying.

if only she knew what kind of a horrid stallion her father really was...

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Hmm, looks like I should read the first story to better understand this one. :twilightsmile:

Kinda boring..... Sorry:twilightsheepish:

1887892 it's just starting out. if you want to wait till it kicks up, read it's prequels.

Hmm, I continue to get more and more curious. Do go on. :pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

Because you clearly stated in the description that you don't know:

Today "Mary Sue" carries a connotation of wish-fulfillment and is commonly associated with self-insertion (the writing of oneself into a fictional story). True self-insertion is a literal and generally undisguised representation of the author; most characters described as "Mary Sues" are not, though they are often called "proxies" for the author. The negative connotation comes from this "wish-fulfillment" implication: the "Mary Sue" is judged a poorly developed character, too perfect and lacking in realism to be interesting.

1896685 *scratches head in confusion* think you can simplify it?

Still, interested, still reading. :pinkiehappy:

1896685 so... basically... a Mary Sue is almost... godlike, with no flaws and overpowered? yeah, Starlight is not like that. she's not godlike or overpowered and she has flaws.

Glad you found out what mary sue is. also good chapter.

Comment posted by Codelyoko22 deleted Jan 5th, 2013
Comment posted by Codelyoko22 deleted Jan 5th, 2013

I'm reminded of Aladin in this chapter... Anyways this is a good story, shold read side ones... :pinkiecrazy:Aaa well:pinkiehappy

1907355 why'd you comment 3 times?

If you want to know what a marry sure is, a Marry Sue is basically someone who is perfect, like can do anything or everything perfectly, like strong, intelligent, fast, etc etc, basically super skilled at almost everything.

1907983 oh.

.......................

so that would mean God is a Mary Sue.

Comment posted by Codelyoko22 deleted Feb 2nd, 2013

1910963 Ouch, good one.

In my opinion, a Mary Sue, or Gary Stu, is a character that is 100% perfect with no flaws at all, be they physical, emotional, or otherwise. So technically, according to some people's view of their god, you would be correct.

Also, I think the whole thing just boils down to personal preference and other people's points of view.

Heck, some take one look at my OCs, notice they have black and red in their color scheme, and instantly judge them.

1895551 wish i could make them smaller, though.

can i has a link to that cover art??:pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2:

Wow, what a jerkwad! Also, yeah, I think Starlight should be grateful. Puts her dad in the hospital and her mom just smacks her in the face? Very lucky.

1937738 who, the black pony.

1937788 yeah, he is.

and i' m surprised nobody made the connection yet. it's right there in plain sight.

Hmm is the black pony Sombra.

1938372 i can neither confirm or deny that assumption.

1938372 He can't be Sombra. He has too much dialogue. :rainbowlaugh:

1939034 HAHAHAHAHA:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: Thats funny right there i'll tell you what.

1939034>>1939041

haha. that was funny. but look at the character tags.

1939620 I did before I ever posted that joke. :pinkiehappy:

1887892 well, it's just starting. give it time.

Hmmm a good story so far so tell me when does she go Back To The Past.

1946182 i cannont dish out any information ahead of time. besides, that would be spoilers.

Comment posted by BBkat deleted Jan 12th, 2013
Comment posted by monsterlord18 deleted Jan 12th, 2013
Comment posted by monsterlord18 deleted Jan 12th, 2013

The lack of capitals was a bit of a put off to me. Though I will admit I am a stickler on those. I might possibly come back around to this in the future.

Knew it was king sombra BUT I DIDNT KNOW HE WAS THE FATHER.

That... this... umm... What?
Is this really the recap of all that happened? I honestly don't know what the buck is going on... :applejackconfused:

Ok, the only real problem I have, it's instincts, not instants. :twilightsheepish: That aside, I can't wait to read more.

1958359 yeah, it helps to read the other stories.

This is getting really good! :twilightsmile:

Great, I've watched enough Dr. Who to know one thing, be it poems, rhymes, lymricks, haikus, or bumper stickers, this isn't good.

1976788 The nursery rhyme about The Doctor and River Song that was played in small bits throughout season 6 & 7, all leading up to the point in time where The Doctor was supossed to get killed by River.

1977822 *scratches head in confusion* i have never seen a episode of Dr. Who in my life. and don't make a big deal, please. i'm not interested.

1978493 Oh, ok. No big deal, as I can completely understand that the show is not for everyone.

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