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Tonight is supposed to be special. Twilight, of course, cannot wait to see her marefriend. But when she arrives at the schoolhouse, on this most scrumptious of occasions, Cheerilee appears upset. But why? It is their anniversary, after all.
Slight innuendo toward the end. Slight...
Contains Twirilee for KrazyTheFox's new Twirilee group!
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You! The gift! I must know!
I only read the first paragraph before I knew I should slap a like/fave on this, and you know what? I was right.
An excellent addition to this under-written ship. I may have to write some, myself. Eventually. (And thanks for the shout-out! Hopefully some writers will take notice and start filling those folders. That'd be somethin'.)
it's my dick in a box!
Wait.....
Twilight, have you something to tell us?
I'm sure the gift will help her students love her.
awwww...
This was a nice short little story, and a good ship that I have only seen in a few other fics. One little thing; you forgot to capitalize Twilight at the end. But otherwise, I couldn't find anything wrong, grammatically or otherwise. I would kind of like to see this expanded into a bit of a longer story, if you're feeling up to it, but it works as a oneshot too. Basically, good job!
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I think most of the TwilightxCheerilee ships are tagged as Cheerilight. This is the first time I've seen it called Twirilee as well.
That aside, great story. Cute, heartwarming and full of continuation potential.
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The most well known Twirilee is probably Romance Reports, and for good reason. That's easily the single greatest fic I've ever read. I say under-written, because it does have a handful of fics around, as rare as they are.
Edit: And yes, it is usually called "CheeriLight", but I find "Twirilee" rolls off the tongue a bit easier. The little bit of cleverness in getting it to work is also a plus.
I know what the gift is. I know what the gift is.
You do not...
Luna's right, how could you possabily know.
Want a hint?
YES.
I guess.
O lightnen up Tia, show some enthusiem.
FINE. Yes, mother, I would like a hint.
Enough of the sarcasm Celestia... Now. What do two ponys that love each other very much and have been together for a year get each other that requires a romantic dinner?
!!! IT'S A RING! SHES PROPOSING!
Yes she is... Now for the review. The story is amazing. Even if I am evil, I ever do so enjoy romances.
I loved it as well. Being princess of the night, I know much about romance.
1874656If you really want to know what the gift was, I refer you to my above comment.
1874948>>1874774 I figured out what was in the box as soon as i read the last lines. I refer you to my previous Comment above for the answer.
Oh my goodness, Twirilee is a rare creature
and is also the best ship. This shall be good.1877200 I believe you are mistaken, if I may chime in, as to what is in the box.
I'm not going to say what's in the box. But I know what's in the box.
Just sayin'.
1877460No you may not chime in so go stick your nose somewhere else.
*SMACK* Who the hell are you?
Midnight's subconcious created me because this group needs an a**hole
But Tia was doing such a good job
Shut up.
HELP ME...
1877460SILENCE... Good, I would like to hear what is in the box, PM me please. NOT A WORD OUT OF YOU TWO...THREE
1877460Ignore the ... uh.. purple one. I will kill her as soon as I figure out how
Good luck, you created me.
i said SILENCE!
Chills..... Everywhere!
1877556 Oh? But I can't just simply tell you what's in the box!
It is something very... intimate... personal...
This story gave me the warm fuzzies, and I love it for that.
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Is it a quill...?
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As George Takei would say, "Oh, my..."
I am glad that you added this piece to the very small collection of Twi-Cheerilee one-shots.
Curses! The box shall remain as a mystery for now, I suppose.
*calls the Mystery Gang*This is well written with a nice mood connecting to real life dilemmas, nice, nice.
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But... But... The box! I don't understand!
Is everyone really this clueless? Its obviously an engagement ring. I mean the story says that they spend the rest of their lives together.
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This scene popped into my head as soon as I read the last line. The fact that it was the third comment down is priceless.