• Member Since 30th Dec, 2012
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A young Pegasus colt's life will forever be altered by a visit to the Everfree Forest. There, he shall find out what his true destiny is...

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"Filly" refers to a young female equine.
Colt is the word you are looking for in the description.
Though rushed quite a bit, it was really good for a first!

:derpytongue2: oh, silly me. I knew that, but didn't realize the error. Thanks>>1874633

you are quite welcome. i'll drop a 'follow' to see where this heads. :scootangel:

Comment posted by IraqLobstah deleted Dec 30th, 2012

awesome story and awesome OC, dude! :D :pinkiehappy:

Some tense change errors, I believe, and the unnecessary use of underlining. Other that that, great! I haven't read the sequel, but I feel like a separate sequel is needed; maybe add on chapters to this instead (probably the former would be best).

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