All was fine, until one Tuesday morning. Twilight takes some books over to Rarity's boutique and finds herself thinking a little too much about her friend. After some more awkwardness they start to hang out more. Then they start to date. But when Spike finds out he is anything but happy...
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That was not bad. I'm going to track this.
Also, it is sew and sewing, not sow and sowing. Those are two quite different things.
But I have never seen a fic where it's Spike X Rarity X Twilight. It's always Rarity X Spike X Twilight. This should be interesting. lol
And RD and AJ randoming making out?
lol wut?
Not a bad start. Let me know if you'd like a proofreader or someone to help flesh out ideas with. I'd be more than happy to help!
1874762 Thanks! I'll probably need it
It was OK,
But you really don't need to write twilight's full name every time . Also it was a little hard to read as there was really didn't seem to be any flow, the beginning started good then went down hill and you need to put space for a new area .
But will track for now to see were it goes
Interesting. I look forward to next chapter.