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Frustrated and bitter over her previous humiliation by Twilight Sparkle, Trixie is in Canterlot, set to perform at the Royal Wedding. In a bar, lamenting her misfortunes, Trixie is unprepared when the changeling invasion begins. Teaming up with Wonderbolt Captain Spitfire, Trixie tries to slow the advance while struggling to overcome her own fears and inadequacies.

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So Trixie lived a lie, but died a hero. Wow.

oh my god that was great
rarely do i see such perfect drama
in so few words

Wow! Nice job! I love this depiction of Trixie, and how she fought with Spitfire. I think you did a great job writing this, and I love all the thoughts going through Trixie's head as she was fighting and preparing to give her life to save the one friend she had, her friend who had other ponies to live for. So touching in the end when she died. Great job man!

Oh gosh I can't believe I am crying a bit. Good story. Trixie deserved being a hero I just wish that in the show she gets to do something good rather then just be selfish

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I know! I was so disappointed with the second Trixie episode because she really didn't get to grow as a character. I really wanted to see her step up and confront her issues. I wanted Twilight, who by this point has learned quite a bit about friendship, to reach out to her. I'd love to see Trixie get some decent character development. But thanks so much for reading. ^^ If it made you cry, then that makes me really happy! I'm glad the story could affect you.

She died?

How the hell did she die?

And if she did die, then Magic Duel! Is it possible,

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Author... you magnificent bastard, I READ YOUR FIC!!

1872710 fimfiction, a place where making people cry like little girls is a good thing.:fluttercry:
But yes I decently agree with you. For instance with babs seed episode they tried to help the buly and she became their friend while in both of the trixie episodes they are like: yes we defeated you trixie by using friendship and we aren't going to help her out instead we are just going to reject her. Twilight didn't even try to reason with her.

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Exactly! I thought it was demeaning to both Twilight AND Trixie's characters. Twilight should know better by now. And in most episodes, Twilight DOES know better. She usually tries to reach out to people, especially people who are clearly making mistakes like Trixie. It was such a shame, because Babs Seed did that whole idea much better.

I'd still like to point out that she may just be sleeping.
Implications can be misleading. Intentionally so at times.

I feel strangely bad and sympathetic for Trixie...why is that? I hope that in a season 4 episode they end up befriending Trixie. I think she would be a very interesting character to have around. Great job with the story. I am looking forward to reading more by you. Keep up the great writing.

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They can, but eyes seldom loose their sparkle just because someone faints... Though there can be other reasons than death, I'll admit to that.

As for the story, I really liked it - it shows quite well that Trixie is not as bad as she is always made out to be. She knows that she doesn't have the magic to power her attack, and yet she presses it with reckless ignorance for the danger that the drain might put her life in. Commendable!:pinkiesad2:

Sooo...Trixie finally got to be a hero. At the cost of her own life. I'll miss her.

I think she did not die but the strain of magic on her caused her to go into a coma so the tragedy is that she might not wake up or if she does wake up she might not have no magic as in never again which is why I believe the story might also be named the Last Dance

You know what this reminds me of?

Of course, this event wasn't televised, nor did it affect as many ponies as it should have...but the resemblance is there.

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Whatchu talking about? Have you not seen the episode Boast Busters? Sure she didn't vanquish the Ursa, but she also didn't run and leave the foals to die! She was kinda a hero there! A coward would've ran, but she stayed!

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Wow. Remember when it was 2013? By Celestia’s hahaing right hoof up her lol it feels like yesterday.

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