It was a normal happy day in Ponyville, as all went on there way. Twilight was especially happy today she was going to help Applejack, when she stumbled across a find that would change the face of Equestria for all time.
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It was a normal happy day in Ponyville, as all went on there way. Twilight was especially happy today she was going to help Applejack, when she stumbled across a find that would change the face of Equestria for all time.
This story seems to have some potential. I suggest having someone edit it for you, I spotted a few errors. You also might try to get an image to put with your story. I would grab more attention and more people would show interest in your story. :)
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Also, I'm pretty sure Opal is a female.