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Tropical Octave


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Celestia's voice was rising as she and her partner, Luna, looked at chief Faust in disbelief. "Please, chief! Just give us another week and I promise we'll get him!"
Luna nodded in agreement. "We know we've got him! Discord is running out of places to hide! Just give us a little--"
Chief Faust stood up abruptly and smacked a fore-hoof on her desk. "Enough! I'm re-assigning you both to board-walk patrol if you so much as think about saying another word!"
"But chief!" Celestia shouted.
Faust waved a dismissive hoof. "Both of you, out of the office! Now."
The door slammed as the chief telekinetically booted Task Force Astral out the door.
Luna turned her head to her partner's with a smirk. "We're still on the case, aren't we?"
"You know it."
Task force astral

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Comment posted by Tropical Octave deleted Dec 31st, 2012

Top of the evening, everyone.
I'm sure you're wondering what you're doing here, but fear not.
I shall be your guide.
Right now, you're contemplating weather or not I just used the right form of "Whether".
Now, you're wondering how I just read your mind.
Worry not, but riddle me this, dear readers.
"Why not read this epic tale of corruption, deception, contemplation and revelation?"
Better yet, why should you list as many words you can think of with "-ion" at the end?
The answer to both of those questions would happen to be a simple; "Why not?"
Now go forth...read this beast.
You know you want to.
~Tropical Octave :pinkiecrazy:

I'll admit I had my doubts... Still do just a little bit, but mostly because I'm still trying to figure this all out... So am I correct to assume that the only one that gets to keep their true powerful form and well, powers, is Discord? Yes? Okay....

This is quite the interesting story ya got going on here... Can't wait to read more. And I can already guess what the major twist is... Though I won't spoil it for anyone else... Especially if it turns out that I'm wrong... Which is often times the case. Oh well... Nothing else to say but please update A.S.A.P. And I look forward to future chapters.:pinkiesmile: Have some mustaches:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

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i don't think the characters are powerful in the sense they're strong magically. as a cop crime comedy it seems that the big bad is strong since he leads a large number of followers sort of how drug lords are.

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