Chapter 1: Livin' The Dream
Josh: Ready?
Kay: I'm always ready.
Josh: Alright, let's move.
Akihabara, Japan
In the area full of cosplayers, two guys, one in a gillie suit with a AS50 prop, and the other with camo cargo pants, black jacket, tactical vest, black helmet and a grey mouth cover, while holding a M16A4 prop.
Josh: Can you believe this?
Kay: What?
Josh: We're finally here! In Akihabara!
Kay: Dreams come true, my friend.
Josh: Yeah, watashi wa koko ni itai watashinojinsei.
Kay: Dude, I seriously have no fucking idea what you're talking about.
Josh: Didn't you take japanese lessons like I told you to?
Kay: Estamos aqui solo para divertise, mi amigo.
Josh: And I have no idea what you're talking about.
Kay: Told you to take spanish lesson. Come on, they're waiting for us!
With that, the two enter the vent and attract lot of attention, from photographers to everyday event goers. During the event, Kay spotted a cosplayer cosplaying as the his favourite character, Fluttershy.
Kay: Is that what I think it is?
Josh: What?
Kay: That girl over is cosplaying as Fluttershy. Imma go try her out.
Josh: You forgot, didn't you?
Kay: What?
Josh: You're terrible at flirting girls!
Kay: Don't worry, Josh. I've study the way, and I'm going for it. Semper fi!
Kay quickly made the move towards the girl. The closer Kay gets, the more he gets nervous, which he forgets to over come it. When he reach the girl, he's completely numbed.
Kay: Hi...uh...wata- Watashi.... Whats that word again?
The girl left him before he can continue. Kay just stand there, watching the girl walk away, and Josh appear.
Josh: I told you to take japanese lessons.
Kay: Okay, I messed that up, again! Got thing I wear my mouth cover, so no one will recognize me. Let's go somewhere else, I feel like an idiot.
The two move to a different area. Then, Kay senses someone is looking at him. He turn around to see a path to an empty hallway. Without hesitation, he walk to the hallway.
Josh: Hey, Kay. They're doing a flash mob there and.... Kay? Kay!
Empty Hallway
Kay walk to the hallway and find nothing.
Kay: 'I swear something's here.'
Josh: Kay!
Kay: Holy shit! Josh! You almost make me shit myself!!
Josh: What the hell are you doing here, man?! We're not suppose to be here!
Kay: Something's here. I can feel it. Like it's calling me.
Josh: Come on, Kay. We better move before the security saw us.
Then, without warning, a white light engulp the two.
Kay: WHAT THE HELL!!
Josh: I told you we should go!!! Holy shiiiiiiiiit!!!
In splits seconds, the light disappears, along with them.
Needs some serious Editing. I would gladly help out if you like. Otherwise, good story.
Woah! Slow down there tiger, you gotta pace yourself or your gonna lose your readers.
Still, this is a new idea, an anime-fan and a mlp-fan working together. So I give you props for that one
if this is your first story good job beacuse my first story got over 600 dislikes and 1 like anyways i agree with bladespinner4 needs some editing
Hmm, an interesting team up, Brony and military otaku.
Still, please get an editor; I beg of you. The idea is good but the mechanical execution needs work.
Biggest problem, space out your paragraphs and have a new paragraph every time there's a new speaker.
All in all, interesting idea but too fast pacing and mechanical problems ruin it.
So, a brony, an otaku, and a russian mercenary walk into a bar.
There, I've set up the joke. do with it what you will.
Kay Y U HAVE NO SAUVE?!
this is what i believe kay ment to say
Welp its been awhile. I remember reading this story back in 2013. Lets see how well it holds up.